Oof

Aw man, THE FEELS! :''D

This was such a great read! The whole idea was a great one, and I loved reading this (even if it was digging at my heart)! This was so sad, but with that ending... ah goodness, this was just a gem. A wonderful job overall, and one for the Favorites! :D

Great job on this story! Keep up the wonderful work! :)

Love Ur Stories! Please continue 3

This is so unique and different! Gosh I love it! It’s so sad but goood!

This was heartbreaking. But, gosh, do I love it. Great job. You really, really have talent with writing the feels. Also, just letting you know, if you create more I'll definitely read it. My, that ending was really good.

AAAAAAHHHHHHHHH THE FEELS! PLEASE CONTINUE, YOUR WRITING IS AMAZING!

I love it how it is but it would be awesome if you continue it... it's up to you though:)

This is so amazing! idk what to say about it other than asdfgHJKLMJNHBGVBHJ
I hope you continue it, cuz it took my heart in its fist and annihilated me n i'd love to see more of this. it's 4:30 in the am right now so i can't really put it into words & i'd love to leave a real review that isn't just keysmashing & emotion gibberish, so forgive me.
I guess what I'm trying to say is, I love the style & the direction it went in. It's bittersweet & almost calming to read, in a morbid, depressing sort of way. the interactions are in character, which I think is the main reason it was calming for me, as I haven't read many fics as of late where, during angsty parts, the characters don't go overboard in their reactions to situations, making me all anxious instead of sad; you wrote their reactions realistically, in my opinion, added the right amount of emotion & described it all in a lovely way.
i think im gonna stop here cuz its getting pretty long & i misspelled opinion as "oppinino" & snorted pretty loudly. why am i up so late

This story is so wicked! There is so much you can do with this. Like Danny wondering why he is the only one who can see Maddie, and why is it only in his ghost form that he can see her? I can see Danny going to Clockwork and asking. And Maybe also wondering if Maddie has a Lair like the other ghosts and maybe wanting to visit it. The Infi-Map could help with looking for it as well. I also have a theory why Maddie can't be seen and interact with stuff like the others ghosts can. When she died in Fenton Works, there was enough ectoplasm in the house to allow her to somewhat form right then and there, tho, she barely has a form because there is not enough in the real world to help her with that, as such, she is a ghost with her conscience mind and a bit of a corporeal body, but that's about all that could form. I wonder if there is a way to give Maddie a complete form so she can interact with the rest of her family? Keep up the great work!

Awww! So bittersweet! Poor Danny, and Maddie, and everyone else T_T
This is great! You should definitely do more :)

WOW, this was amazing. I really hope you update!

GREAT WORK!

This is really good. I'd read it if you wrote more

MY. HEART. CANT. HANDLE! *DIES*

This is beautiful writing. Just amazing.