Hooray! You’re back! Loved this chapter! I had almost forgot about Mila’s Turnwheel! Glad to see that some of the summoned Heroes (aka Lyndis and I assume Roy next chapter) have joined Corrin’s cause! Looking forward to the next chapter! Keep up the great work!

Glad to have you back man. I was getting worried this story was gonna be dropped. Now my worries have been alleviated.

As for the chapter, I like how you did pay credence to the fact that Sinon (and by extension Yuuki and Aiko) serve Corrin due to them trusting in him and his mission. Not to mention them fighting Lyn, you would think they would be creamed since she is a legendary warrior from Elibe. Certainly fortunate that isn't the case.

Smart doing the 3v3 instead of a whole army like in the game. Makes it easier on you writing the fight scenes, and we won't get lost on massive army battles every chapter. Smart move.

I don't think I have much else to say. Looking forward to the next chapter, when we see which legendary warrior will join Corrin's cause next. Till then,.

Ja ne

I wonder what it's like for the people they summoned with the Turnwheel. Even if they're used to this kind of stuff, it must've been a bit of a surprise. And Hayato actually is a "grown man"? When I played the game, I thought he was just saying that.

Roy and Lyn coming to play a part in the story? That’s gonna be interesting. I like that Sinon and Lyn are bonding a little, too.
If the turnwheel can summon anyone at all, could it possibly summon characters from Mataras’ Fire Sword world? I imagine that you’d need his permission. (I’m not counting his own sequel).

OMG! It's still Alive! YES! pretty good chapter too! I wonder what you plan to do from here. Would it get better? I really hope so. Maybe you can also update soon too! I can't take two hours off each day to do this, just not enough time since I plan to do around 30 pages per chapters. Can't wait for your next update! Also, is the brand for the SAO characters? I can't wait!

YES! IT LIVES! I was rather worried that this tale would remain unfinished, and I am most glad that my fears proved groundless. It is equally heartening to see that your skill has not dulled with your absence.
Looking forward to seeing their encounter with (I think) Ike, and how their journey will progress from here out!
Welcome back!

I love the story so far. Please update.

Great chapter! I missed this story! Glad you updated! In any case, I enjoyed this chapter immensely. I liked how you referenced Fire Sword by Mataras in this. Keep it up!

All right! We got to see the first meeting between the two royal parties, well done!

Oooooooookay, firstly, I wasn't pissed, I was just simply asking if you can make the outro just be like the opening with just talking about whatever whatever. But if you ain't gonna stop with the omakes, eh, still figured at I at least asked.

Now, lots to comment on here, both on a critiquing level and a personal level. I'll start with the personal level, in my opinion this was slightly too early to do in the story right now given how it would've been a bit better to do it when Odin, Laslow, and Selena joined the party so that they could have joined in and be astonished at being back home temporarily. This same reason applies for none of the SAO girls joining to Ylisse as well, if at least one of them had to go it would've been best to do Sinon and then have her meet Chrom again. But in my opinion, the biggest wasted opportunity was not having Jacob come along, the banter between him and Frederick was GOLD in the game with them trying to outdo the other in their loyalties to their charge before forming a bond over their shared methods. But that's just me, lol.

Now for the critiquing part, ignoring my personal feelings above I do have to say this was very unique and clever to do. Using the random invasion segments and putting it together with the Before Awakening mission in Fates, which actually makes a lot of sense in hindsight. Having Sinon teach Sakura is great, given how she's a master sniper and that Sakura's main weapon is the bow, she ain't gonna get a better teacher than her and her use in the teachings in the following battle shows how her learning goes. The teamwork was also great, especially between Corrin and Chrom, nuff said.

It wasn't word for word like the previous chapter was, but even if it was to be, just the fact you showed everyone doing stuff instead of focusing on a single group makes this better than the previous chapter. So, yeah, this was a nice read. Good improvement, I cannot wait to see what's next.

No... Haha! I can't believe you decided to go for that so soon! I thought you'd wait a little, but this is great anyway! It was a great idea to give Corrin a handicap by separating him and the retainers. Plus, it also avoided and paradox with Mataras' Fanfic. I did feel the update was a bit short, but real life is more important and just the fact that you updated a new chapter makes me extremely estatic for being stuck in Midterms week. Thank you very much! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Before I begin my review, I just need to say that those outro conversations at the end of the chapters are getting old, stale, and annoying. Is it possible you can stop doing them and just do normal author's notes?

Now for the actual review, honestly I have nothing to say about this. Besides the inclusion of the SAO crew and Yuzu this is the Fort Jinya mission almost entirely word for word and action to action. My only criticism for this is how it majorly only focuses on the SAO girls' fights and nothing else. Also that entire exchange where Sinon did that crazy plan Corrin would hate was hard to follow. The fight between Aiko and Saizo was awesome, and if I may say, I'm actually wanting to see more of them interacting together. Like how Sinon and Takumi are obviously gonna be a couple, I can bet Aiko and Saizo could be a thing too.

But yeah, nothing much to say here besides good work, and that I cannot wait to see what's next down the line.

Great chapter! Loved it! Glad you’re back!

Dude, that omake at the end was hilarious! I'm really glad to see that this story is alive and very well!

Saizo CAN protect his allies adequately. The number of times he's gotten a critical or activated his Lethality skill with a less than 10% stat on it? The game's rigged in his favour!