Interesting that Eve was the one crushed by the holodeck, I like the way things like that are altered from the original (destroy the plant, moving with the storm, the EVE sisters, and all others made it an interesting read and kept me engaged throughout.
I do think you missed an opportunity where Eve could have changed her name to Eva (with or without the h).

My fav ship and couple

I love walle thank u for making this my otp is walleve so thank u have a blessed life

It's great to see there's still someone writing WALLE fanfiction and this series is a great one.

(In response to Anon)
I'm so glad you got the point! I wanted to experiment a little bit by putting this story in first-person instead of third. You're probably right, I could have gotten the point of the movie better if I had used third-person, but I wasn't trying to capture the spirit of the movie, I was trying to do my own thing. I've already written in third-person like a million times, and I just kind of wanted to explore a more in-depth personal side to their relationship dynamic.
Thank you for reviewing! :D

I have always thought the love story between two robots in WALL-E was really cute. I like that you wanted to build off their chemistry, but I wonder how this story would have turned out in third-person instead of first.
With your first-person narrative, you tell us a lot of what the characters are thinking/feeling - e.g. "it's starting to grate on my nerves" (which makes the reader feel like they are reading exposition instead of feeling the moment for themselves) - but what was moving about WALL-E is that they didn't talk at all, instead you could see how the characters were feeling through their nonverbal cues, and be moved by it.
I would love to see you write a story for the characters in third-person were you didn't tell me what they were thinking but showed me how they were feeling from their movements and gestures.
Good luck with your stories. I like your initial concepts.