The 3rd chapter's only drawback seems to be your grammer.

I don't why I like Levi's POV. Maybe because of his colourful speaking. Lmao. xD Update soon!

The second chap is really 's character was well .

I get it that its your first fan 's quite good but the only loophole to me seems to be the fact that the plot runs off too quick..but it's just the first chap so well done.

Oh, it was exelent and so damn cute ;D Please, write more, because I like it so much.

It was "so damn cute" :D I can't wait long for another chapter, because it's very good.

Pls update soon

Why I found this fic so late? Why I couldn't saw it erlier and said to you something like this; "Please, write more, because I love it. It's very good story and I want to read moore". Thank you for that and please return to it :)

Im sorry about that review my brother did that.

Levi And Mikasa are related
Absolutely Disgusting. *Reported*

I enjoyed this very much. I like how you switched between point of views. I also liked the length of this chapter. Good job! :-)

Nice chapter. I wonder what will happen when Mikasa wakes up.

I'm curious to find out what happens next!