pls update...

Shits convoluted and lucifer is giving me a pompous European vibes but I guess whatever happens happens.

You got me there. I had full faith you rocked your midtest. You'll get em next time tiger

You're telling me Lucifer doesn't even sense all of the things going on in or around that church, or that he didn't leave any sensing spells on her? Bollocks to that

Hmmm wonder what Irina will think of Issei's death and how it will attract her to lucifer.

is the Lucifer tv show from Netflix or the supernatural ?

Wow, that was just a lot going on the past few chapters. Some of this story kind of dragged for me, feeling somewhat pedantic, but I'm glad I stuck around. I think we were all waiting for Lucifer to get his switch flipped. I'm highly enjoying all of the plot and subplot. Just don't completely stall romantic progression please.

Also, I hated how they protested gabriel as well. What, is she some kind of angel of innocence that can do our think nothing else? I much prefer the gabriel perspective you and I have written. Innocent, to be sure, but with a certain wisdom and strength of character.

Thanks for the story.

I still can't get past how this paints Rias as a villain, not directly of course. But, it's an arranged marriage. Those things take time and effort, something Rias wasn't giving it. In the end, Riser is redeemed and looks like the good guy.

Ya know, right at the end there, you have gabriel coming off like lenny from 'of mice and men.'

Question and random pointless comment. Question, it took the combined force of the angels, fallen, and devils to quell Ddraig and Albion but Lucifer can do it so easily? Random comment, Rias got called detective as a random nickname, since he's oldschool I think gumshoe would've been funnier. Now you set why I called the comment random and pointless lol.

I love how you aren't making the harem easy. Even if it is somewhat common in devil society, you can't expect a young woman to accept sharing her love. Harems truly only work if they're written well.

Now, I can't say I liked the scene with raiser. Though, I disliked it for reasons other than the lack of a fight... though I'd have liked that too. No, my issue was how well raiser came across. Aside from his outfit he seemed noble and simply willing to do his duty. He lacked any real reason to dislike him. Honestly, Rias came off as this spoiled brat who refuses to do as he family requires. It just seems like her hatred got him is unfounded.

This story simply leaves me curious. As things go I get more and more so. My only issue with this character, as is my issue with many OC's is that I cannot hear them in my mind. I don't know his voice. You're making a valiant effort with the unique dialogue, it just doesn't make much sense. I'm truly curious how things will go when he meets Michael.

one small quibble... English is not an easy language to learn as it is idiosyncratic, unlike most European languages that are formulaic with masculine-feminine and neutral as well as differing declensions; English, however, follows its own quirky rules that differ per dialect.

You just made Griselda admit God’s death in front of Xenovia, yet she didn’t react to it at all...

Didn’t you say Rose is a bishop now in your story?!
Yet you keep referring to her as a rook.