New chapter please or at least a notice that your still working on this story :( I still like reading this story. Good luck.

I hope you come back to continue the story :( I still want to see more Yami and Yugi interaction and many other things in your fan fiction...

So Solomon accidentally saved Yugi from another interaction with Yami. I can’t wait for Yugi and Yami to have there 2nd encounter with each other XD I’m so curious if Yami is actually a good or bad guy in this story :)

Please update! I’m still curious on what happens next :O I’m also still wondering if Yugi is in summer vacation or if he will eventually go to school?

If I can help make a suggestion, I would suggest giving Pegasus some type of backstory like for example in the movie Coraline, the elderly ladies used to be theatre performer’s. Anyway, I was so excited this updated and looks like something mysterious happened when Yugi left and introduce himself to Pegasus.

Cool chapter l, I can’t wait to see what happens next for them.

I have read another Coraline story here but it felt more like a copy/paste of the movie.

This however seems promising. Characters are in line and it feels very refreshing. For a first fanfic, your descriptions are spot on and I can see that you want to deliver a good story.

So kudos to ya (and check out my Pokemon crossovers if ya have a chance.)

Really curious about reading this since I like the movie Coraline. So does Yami have the button eyes like in the movie? Will Yugi be going to school in this story or will he be in Summer vacation? Wondering who the odd neighbors will be?

I have never read or watched Coraline, but this story ha got me hooked.

Cool story so far, I can't wait to see what happens for them.

Yasmin: Joey knows. Something. Whatever it is he doesn't seem to like it XD.

Chip: Does Yami mark the people whom he spoils? If so, is the mark the Eye of Horus or the Sennen Puzzle? Or just a simple star because of the hair? XD Or was it just a birthmark or something and Yugi's been destined since the day he was born for that to happen?

Yasmin: Why doesn't Joey want to stay? Is it because he's just freaked out of Yami and stuff or is it that he doesn't want to mess any thing up to make Yugi slightly upset because then Season Zero Yami will awaken?

Lapel: We've noticed you've changed the format and think it looks a lot better! This chapter is full of mystery (especially since I, personally, have not seen Coraline completely) and it does a good job at keeping the readers entertained and wanting more-

Chip: MOOOOOORE

Yasmin: WE WANT MOOOOOORE

Penni: MOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEE

Thank you for the chapter. Hope you have a nice day.

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Thank you for the chapter. Hope you have a nice day.

This story is just... beautiful.