This was such an original piece! I don't even know where to begin with my praise. First of all, yay for Andromeda and Narcissa reuniting. I totally headcanon that, and I like that Narcissa's in Teddy's life and by default, Lucius is. I liked how you described the relationship between Lucius and Narcissa from Lucius's POV. One mishap and he's out of Narcissa's house. I can totally see her giving him that ultimatum when he got out of Azkaban. I can totally see Andromeda and Narcissa spying on Lucius during his first solo interactions with Teddy too.

Lucius and Teddy's relationship warmed my heart and made me smile. I loved how Teddy changed his hair to match Lucius' and his witty banter and jokes about Lucius' age. Most of all, I loved Lucius' desire to step it up and be a father figure to Teddy. In a way, it seems like he's pushing for it because he wasn't there for Draco. Either way, Teddy and Lucius can learn a lot from each other.

I adored this and would read more of this should you ever choose to continue it. You've inspired me to write something with Lucius being a father figure to Teddy in the future. And of course, I shall credit you for the inspiration. :) Lovely job!

Your feedback from Hogwarts for Assignment One (Muggle Art)

Your Grade: 18/20 (EE)
Your Examiner: Sam (HP Slash Luv)
Your Feedback:
"I thought the physical descriptions were great, especially with Teddy's hair color. Everyone was in character, and I especially love the way you wrote Lucius. You made him very realistic, with what he might have been like after 14 years in Azkaban. I really loved your characterizations of everyone. Although I've read stories about Lucius getting out of Azkaban after canon, I never saw a story exploring his relationship with Teddy, so I thought it was a very original idea. The prose flowed well, and the dialogue was well written. Everything was great with the fluidity. I saw a bit of the prompt in the beginning, but I would have liked to see it more than I did. Lucius being the one to be emotionally distanced is the most original idea either even if your execution was great. I really enjoyed the story, and found it very interesting. There was three missing comma that I saw, but spelling and syntax was great.."

Laughs and wonders if she can learn balso, it sounds fun.
Nice story.

That was a lovely story. Thanks for writing it.

Well written great story