Reviews for Should've Known Better
One-True-Czarina chapter 15 . 10/16/2019
Now THAT was a good chapter. Best chater yet.
One-True-Czarina chapter 5 . 10/15/2019
Ok. I'm really enjoying this story. I think it would benefit from a once over for spelling and grammar mistakes but it's got good plot. One thing I am obligated to point out is that silencers are a misnomer. They don't actually make a gun shot silent. It will still be noticeably a gun shot. Silencers just dampen the sound so you dont need hearing protection to fire a gun. I'll keep reading now. It's good otherwise.
Kurleyhawk2 chapter 33 . 8/16/2019
Excellent story, loved the way you wrote the characters and the ending!
Guest chapter 33 . 12/21/2018
What a great story ! I read it in one day!
I can't wait to read more from you !
Amazing work
Guest chapter 33 . 11/28/2018
Please write about Sheriy, alex and ben
Sergio Italico chapter 26 . 11/13/2018
Jack's not dead, as seen in Antony Horowitz new book: Never Say Die. If you cold make Jack come back into the story it could lead to an amazing plot Twist. BTW, I love the story, it's deep and it really tears into Alex's emotions.
Guest chapter 33 . 10/23/2018
Great story with a great ending!

I hope to read more of you and Alex
Idea for the next story: What if a boy get's a crush on Alex? How will that happen?
Guest chapter 33 . 10/23/2018
Fantastic work
Can't wait to see more stories from you about Alex.
VINAI chapter 1 . 10/19/2018
Aw, I’m sad to see this story go! I loved it so much and the way you portrayed the characters was fantastic. I would totally be interested in a sequel or filler one shots set in this storyline! Keep up the great work! Can’t wait to read more from you!
Guest chapter 33 . 10/18/2018
Amazing ending to an amazing story: so much heartbreak, but a happy note at the end! The writing was well done all the way through, and the story itself cohesive and really great to read. Thanks for wiring this. Love it!
lordjohnford chapter 33 . 10/17/2018
Best way to start the morning. Loved it. I've loved every mi ute of reading this. Everything from your plot to character development was perfect. Sad to see it end but it was a great ending.
Charlotte chapter 32 . 9/29/2018
Please update
Guest chapter 1 . 9/13/2018
Please update
Guest chapter 32 . 9/9/2018
Please update quickly I'm in love with this fanfic
- SisterZadist
lordjohnford chapter 32 . 8/27/2018
Another great chapter. Well written as always. I wouldn't have said cheesy, I also quite enjoy h/c scenes with Alex and any of K-Unit, especially Ben. I can't wait for your next chapter. Hope to see it soon.
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