Reviews for Should've Known Better |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Now THAT was a good chapter. Best chater yet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ok. I'm really enjoying this story. I think it would benefit from a once over for spelling and grammar mistakes but it's got good plot. One thing I am obligated to point out is that silencers are a misnomer. They don't actually make a gun shot silent. It will still be noticeably a gun shot. Silencers just dampen the sound so you dont need hearing protection to fire a gun. I'll keep reading now. It's good otherwise. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent story, loved the way you wrote the characters and the ending! |
![]() ![]() What a great story ! I read it in one day! I can't wait to read more from you ! Amazing work |
![]() ![]() Please write about Sheriy, alex and ben |
![]() ![]() ![]() Jack's not dead, as seen in Antony Horowitz new book: Never Say Die. If you cold make Jack come back into the story it could lead to an amazing plot Twist. BTW, I love the story, it's deep and it really tears into Alex's emotions. |
![]() ![]() Great story with a great ending! I hope to read more of you and Alex Idea for the next story: What if a boy get's a crush on Alex? How will that happen? |
![]() ![]() Fantastic work Can't wait to see more stories from you about Alex. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, I’m sad to see this story go! I loved it so much and the way you portrayed the characters was fantastic. I would totally be interested in a sequel or filler one shots set in this storyline! Keep up the great work! Can’t wait to read more from you! |
![]() ![]() Amazing ending to an amazing story: so much heartbreak, but a happy note at the end! The writing was well done all the way through, and the story itself cohesive and really great to read. Thanks for wiring this. Love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Best way to start the morning. Loved it. I've loved every mi ute of reading this. Everything from your plot to character development was perfect. Sad to see it end but it was a great ending. |
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![]() ![]() Please update quickly I'm in love with this fanfic - SisterZadist |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter. Well written as always. I wouldn't have said cheesy, I also quite enjoy h/c scenes with Alex and any of K-Unit, especially Ben. I can't wait for your next chapter. Hope to see it soon. |