This is really cute. I love the fact that, despite his reluctance to be on youtube, Lorcan came out of his shell and managed to gain himself a fanbase.

I've never read anything with Luna being killed off and it honestly surprised me. The poor boys! D:

Lovely story!

Hiya!

Congratulations on winning the August Twins Event! I may or may not have looked through all of your entries (totally guilty, lmfao), and I really enjoyed them! I love this one, in particular, though, because it touches on something that I feel would actually happen in the Wizarding World: bias against the disabled.

Although this was only 417 words, this story really gave this trope justice. ;) I enjoyed Hestia's reaction to her sister's situation, and I loved how you gave a possible solution to the problem. Many writers say what the problem is, but don't show an ambition to have said problem challenged.

I feel like, given what we know about the Carrows, this was a wonderful introduction into their characters. I felt... connected, in a way, to Hestia. She was someone relatable. I think everyone has had a moment where they were forced to see someone they cared about be negatively affected by something out of their control. I feel like everyone has wanted to change something - even if it seemed impossible.

I really do value the level of depth you've given her. It's admirable. I like the flow and grammar of this piece, as well. This may be one of my favorite drabbles that you've written.

Really good job, Sam!
~Krissy

loved it thank you

more please thank you

maybe they both should just drop her that way noone wins