Reviews for Service with a Smile
Fullmetal11791 chapter 34 . 19h
Damn that last scene was awesome. It's looking like it's not Pyrrah? Fingers crossed.
Fullmetal11791 chapter 33 . 20h
Well, went into this thinking, and kinda hoping, that it would be a Velvet/Jaune pairing due to the thumbnail. Hadn't read that pairing in a while and it seemed like it would be interesting, especially with this story premise.

And from here, i think both Pyrrah and Miltia would take this story in interesting directions. But im really, really hoping its Miltia, simply due to how Jaune already has all the other underworld connections. Dating Pyrrah brings expected conflict, while i think dating Miltia brings far more exciting conflict. The danger of dating a mafioso while under legal attack. The conflict of morals with his best friend. Etc.

Ive got a feeling its going to be Pyrrah, which i think is unfortunate, but i guess we'll see.
Fullmetal11791 chapter 19 . 7/22
While i cant say i completely disagree with your portrayal of her, reading Yandere Pyrrha is pretty uncomfortable.
Fullmetal11791 chapter 11 . 7/21
Loved Coco's reaction to the twins tsundere act at the end.
Peter ver dilan chapter 62 . 7/20
this was so fulfilling. you probably won't read this but thank you couer for your hard work providing so much entertainment and enjoyment. seriously thank you
RadicalEncounter chapter 60 . 7/19
Rereading Service with a Smile, and on the most part it holds up well even with knowing how the story goes. Had a bit of a let down moment though, a few chapters back, when Ruby admits to Yang that she'd been kissing boys behind the shed.

I'd, on my initial read, broken down laughing at that mental image, and after finishing the work, remembered that moment far more vividly than it had any right to be as a two or three line narration.

Though, I didn't expect the post chapter authors note for this one to be so darkly humorous reading it in 2020.
Ace McKnight chapter 62 . 7/13
Somehow, either because of or in spite of the slice of life nature of the story, I think this is one of your best. I've always appreciated character driven stories, and this one was exceptional, especially your flushing out of "blank slate" characters like Russell and the twins. All in all, this story really works well for what it is. Thank you for a great read, as usual.
Suicidal Nobody chapter 62 . 7/12
This was such a great story and I loved reading every part of it. Thank you for writing yet another brilliant masterpiece and I'm looking forward to the next one.

-just a little Nobody
Guest chapter 62 . 7/12
Who cares about your dog, its reasons lile this that people will flock to the stories by "I luvgrace420" and "mr grimjaw" because they dont stop writing cuz of a stupid dead dog.

Grow up.,
GuiltyEyes3432 chapter 61 . 7/5
I rlly liked it when things started to get intense and realized how deep the rabit hole of destruction goes. It rlly hooks me just as it did in ur other works.
GuiltyEyes3432 chapter 62 . 7/5
Finally got around to finishing this.
I remember the first time I read till chapter 4 I think then dropped it because it wasnt interesting. I picked it up a month and several of your books later deciding to give it another shot. Your stories are lovely but sometimes start of a bit slow or boring which happens and is understandable. Considerign I loved the others i decided to give this one another shot too.

I loved it. The ending was werid with how everything worked out, I honeslty thought we were going to go through the tragedy again just like in Professor Arc and how its comedy took a turn to seriousness (which was amazing and I loved it). Suprised it didnt happen here though was a bit werid.

Im happy Phyraa has confronted Jaune about her feelings, finally! This is like the one story were you let them kiss and they are somehow both alive and happy. I rlly do want to see a Pyhraa x Jaune story written by u because i do love your works. I liked how you brought in Maline x Jaune was a unique take espically considering she was only in the trailer for Yang.

Loved the story, I teared up a bit when Ruby survived the train crash and blake explained how she rushed to the cafe to see it destroyed (again) and blood around.

It was honestly lovely to see all the characters talk and relax in the cafe. And how the "good guys" and the "bad guys" could only be tables away from each other talking about each other or listening in to each other.

Adam and Mercury slowly forming a sort of bond was nice. Honestly how you written Adam was amazing, its how I expected him to go before he turned into this obssed with blake while Ilia took the side of caring about the faunus and what not. Though idk if a pschyo Adam would ahve worked in ur story.

Rubys dialogue was lovely. You always know how to write them and bring life into the characters.
Cinder was nice, i liked how we were on the journey to try and bring life (and character/personality) into her.

I wish we learned about what Mercury thought of everything.
Also it seems like Russel and Velvet didnt get together or at least it wasnt stated, oh well.

Btw there was a scene where pyhraa was going to train jaune but then it was never ever brought up again.

I liked how you explored how Pyhraa could have gone completley shut off if not for Jaune at the begining pretty cool concept.

honestly alot of cool and new things were presented in this fic and i loved it. Good job, espically on the characters and the bonds they could form.

Loved the story, werid ending but I guess not everything has to lead to the fall of Becaon, even though Im suprised its the one where he is a civlian which does it. Would ahve been rlly interesting to see that happen from a civilians eyes oh well.
GuiltyEyes3432 chapter 33 . 7/5
U know Phyraa offered to train Jaune at least in Self defense combat and Jaune agreed but it has not been brought up even ONCE after that! Was it forgotten? What happened!
GuiltyEyes3432 chapter 26 . 7/4
Ruby is best friend

I am rooting for Pyrrha!
GuiltyEyes3432 chapter 12 . 7/4
I wonder if Phyrra is gonna meet Jaune and perhaps train him.

I get why Phyra is being closed of. Hek we even gets lots of hints with how Russel keeps refering to her as the Invincible Girl.
GuiltyEyes3432 chapter 9 . 7/4
Cinder plz spare my boi Jaune and his resturant or at least Jaune so he can rebuild
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