okay
finally nice ending with the lcture
I really enjoyed it
but yeah this is fanfiction I can make it ... anything I want
about mustang transmutation, I think he need a circle,not the spark
cause the gloves also dont make a spark, but have circle

but it's okay
and now I know how dangerous it is when electricity blackout in winter
I'm in trophical land so I really enjoy reading about snow

I love the Mustang and Hughes team up to save Ed!
Great ending to a great story!

I like it! it's a great story

That ending made me laugh, I love it! And Hughes is the best! 3

nerve wracking but still cute story!

This was so good! This fic deserves so many more reviews that it's gotten. That was a wonderful little read, and I thank you for writing it! :D

LOOOOOVE ITTTTT

I love this so much, this is just what i needed. Good job! Like, Seriously!

ah! i really enjoyed that! i love Hurt!Ed fics :3

i don't meen to be picky, but i do think there was a few odd parts though x3
1: OMG they kept moving Ed :O they wouldn't have know if he had internal bleeding, and probably shouldn't have kept moving him around so much.
2: why didn't they let Ed hold one of the hot water pots? would have warmed his hands, and the steam would have warmed his face.
3: Ed had turned his arm into a blade right? then right after Roy had found him...did i just forget Ed turning it back or did Ed have a swordarm the whole time? x3
4: why only use 1 blanket from the couch? didn't Maes have more in his room, or even Eelisias room?

those are very miner things though, and can be easily overlooked most people problemly won't even notices those things lol. and regardless, the fic was a great H/C story!

i absolutely LOVE parental!Roy and parental!Maes, so it was great to have both in one :3 hope you write more like it! 3

-ZeyTheFox-

I just imagined Ed getting diphtheria and the vaccine not available to him yet... kinda like in Balto. Like I imagine he gets diphtheria but he doesn't die. He almost does, because he needs to vaccine, but someone manages to bring it in. Why I imagined it is because it seems to more readily effect children, and Ed is still a child at fifteen. I also imagined Hughes and Roy desperately caring for him like they have here.

I think that stab wound is infected though... I mean, who knows what was on the blade? Dirt, blood, germs... And I really don't think Edward needs a lecture at the moment, since his life isn't quite out of danger yet. The power could go out again, the possible infection in his wound could make him develop a serious fever, he could get pneumonia from nearly freezing to death, the serial killer could break in and attack them(specifically Ed), among other things.

I'm really liking your story so far. Great job. looking forward to the next chapter. Great job!