love it

could you right this as a male version as well

Well, it's great and all, but rorke went from normal rorke at the start to rapey rorke from the Elias death section to the end of the one shot... didn't expect him to be thinking that way

Love reading your fanfic are you going to do a rorke version of Charlie being taken. Hope to read more xx.

Excellent as always! Rorke is one twisted fella, I must say. I hope Charlie kicks his ass to Timbuktu, but honestly it pretty much always gets worse before it gets better. I loved this fic, and I can't wait to hear from you again- you're one of my favorite fic writers!

mmmmmmmmmmmmMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM I am /always/ jazzed to see things from you! This was the highlight of my day, to be honest. Rorke is such a damn creep, though- super nasty. Half your age plus seven, Gabriel! I'm relatively sure she doesn't meet those requirements. Still, his budding obsession with 'the one that got away' concerns probably everyone involved including myself. Can't wait to see what you write next, since it's always high quality.