Reviews for Intertwined
Roxhall1 chapter 2 . 1/8
please update soon
Lovely Black Butterfly chapter 1 . 11/19/2019
For you not to be a native English speaker, this is superb writing. It is a pity you did not continue this story I long for a good Bellisle story
Peter Facinelli Fan chapter 1 . 8/4/2019
Please continue!
Gabby2003 chapter 2 . 9/22/2018
this is one if the best written fanfic I've come across. I've read this time and time again and I'm not tired of reading it
Goldielover chapter 2 . 11/11/2017
First off, I would like to apologize for the extremely late review. I am so far behind on them that it isn't funny.

Nice going on chapter 2. I absolutely loved the lusty nurses. Poor Carlisle having to put up with that, and poor Edward for having to hear their thoughts if he ever visits at the hospital.

I know it has been a few weeks, but I'm hoping that you are planning on continuing this story, as I'm enjoying it thoroughly.

Thank you for the update.
JunkFoodJacki chapter 2 . 10/2/2017
I’m excited to read more of your work! You certainly have a knack for words!
harmony82 chapter 2 . 9/29/2017
Just 2 chapters and you held me capture ... love your choice of words
Lexi-DeAnne Clearwater chapter 2 . 9/29/2017
I'm so glad to see an update from you! This was such a great chapter and I'm really looking forward to more.
simbacurls chapter 2 . 9/28/2017
So happy you updated. Can't wait to read more
harmony82 chapter 1 . 8/15/2017
I would love to read more ... nice start ... Have your time
AHealingRenaissance chapter 1 . 8/12/2017
I'm an ENFJ, so not exactly the same, but I like this Carlisle :D
orchidluv chapter 1 . 8/12/2017
This is awesome and I can't wait to read more
Lexi-DeAnne Clearwater chapter 1 . 8/9/2017
This is fantastic
sweetsouthernsongbird chapter 1 . 8/9/2017
I'm very much looking forward to more.
Goldielover chapter 1 . 8/9/2017
I really hope you do decide to continue this story. I'm always happy to see a new Carlisle/Bella story, and this one definitely shows promise.

It would be interesting to see how he meets Bella, and the progression of their relationship. It would also be interesting to meet the rest of the Cullens. I like your introspective and somewhat melancholic Carlisle. I think it is exactly what he would be like after spending so much time on his own just watching life go by.

While there are a couple of grammar and spelling issues, you really did very well considering you are not a native English speaker. Better than many who are native English speakers, actually.

Thank you for posting this.