WOW! This is AMAZING! You did such an awesome job on getting into each character. I also appreciate the level of editing - many people don't try to use correct grammar rules while writing, but this was A1. Keep writing!

Oh, I love this, love it. I got all teary at the end. I always liked therelationship between Garcia and Hotch. Kinda thought they could make a fun romantic pairing too. Someone so light and full of joy would be good for him. It's why I liked Beth so much and didn't like Haley. I liked that it was Hotch who held her and talked to her. she needed that from the boss, the one who brought her on to the team.

This was fantastic! Loved how every member reached out to her and were concerned for her! Just wonderful 3

That was a good story. Looking forward to reading more. Great work.