That was adorable

So sweet, love it!

Lots of spelling mistakes!

Sweet story b

Can u do another Jane and Carlos?

This was very sweet. It progressed naturally and ended well. There are some spelling errors that need to be fixed, but this is overall a well-written story!

3 LOVE THIS ONE SHOT 3 EXCELLENT WORK! BEST COUPLE EVER!

Nice! I really enjoyed your story! This pairing is on my top list after watching Descendants 2!
Love Jay's pet name for Lonnie! Simply adorable

Aww. You know I ship Jay and Audrey but now I love Jay and Lonnie too

Great one-shot, it would make an awesome story like when jay took her to the nurse they found out her ankle was broken, then maybe another chapter where they tell their friends they are dating, and so on... these are just suggestions, you dont have to use these ideas or make the story longer if you dont want to

JayxLonnie Forever

Why must you always catch my heart with your writing?! This was amazing and beautiful. Although not one of my top ships, it's still cute and you portrayed the characters perfectly. Keep writing!
~Evil

Can you please do one of mal and ben child where uma tries to kidnap him but the child has magic powers and turns into a dragon

i clicked so fast when i was Lonnie and Jay when i read how he felt and jay kissing her and i was shrieking such a good story hopefully you can make more of this two together though there are minor spelling errors nothing to big but such good story

OH MY CHERRY BLOSSOMS! This was perfection. Jay/Lonnie are just magical together. I felt that from Descendants the first time. Even if their moment was short. ;-)