Reviews for Broken Lab Dreams |
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![]() ![]() how did simon get out of the lab |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh please continue! I can't wait for the next |
![]() ![]() ![]() I couldn't help but feel sympathy for Simon in this chapter; in a state of confusion and excruciating pain, it's difficult for him to get back to Earth. I like how you are converying these feelings in your writing, and I'm piqued to know what will happen next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hey, I've actually been following this story and keep it tabbed on my web browser...I'm just terrible at writing reviews or keeping up with updates! That being said, I already know that Simon has to be in a coma, but I'm still trying to discover what happened to Simon that made him go into a coma. I have a theory that the back pain is the key to the issue, but I'm just not sure what role it plays. I cannot wait to see what you come up with next! I know that you've got a good story, but will it only be at the end where Simon wakes or will it happen sooner but with terrible side effects? Keep up the good work and please be sure to update as often as possible! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oohhh... This was magnificent! |
![]() ![]() ![]() nicely done such a wonderfully written chapter. I really wonder what's going to happen next. |
![]() ![]() ![]() AHHH I got goosebumps reading the flashback! You are the most incredible writer, especially when it comes to this lot! I can't wait for more simonette moments! Becka xo |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh! This was, once again, a great chapter! You're really building up a lot of tension and even Simonette here. I love it! On another note, it's great to know that Simon is conscious. But the last few paragraphs got me thinking; is he the experiment? |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww, reading the graduation parts was so nice. I love imagining those kind of things for the gang. and the suspense continues! can't wait to see what you update with next, girl! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm starting to get the feeling that Jeanette died. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I did rather enjoy this chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was excellent. Glad you updated. |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg please come back to this! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dark and suspenseful. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was so good! I enjoyed it so much! You described his situation so well, and it was easily readable. Definitely looking forward to seeing what happens later in the story. Becka xo |