Your really good!

OML I loved this story! You are a very good writer and I hope to see a sequel someday!

XD When Aunt May said “Though time travel’s not possible yet..” I immediately thought of Doctor Steven Strange... XD :

A sequel needed!Great job~

i loved this! also i finally saw spider-man and it was amazing

Omg nooo it's over! He left his suit in the hospital and his mask was destroyed in the wreckage! And now his identity might get out! Oh no :( Anyway, I have to say - this was an awesome story to read! I really enjoyed the plot and everyone was definitely in character. It was very tense and fun to read. I enjoyed it immensely. I wish I could forget it and experience it all over again! I also really want to see you write that sequel! Thanks so much for taking the time to write this. I loved every minute and kind of felt like I was watching a second Spider-Man movie because the scenes were so well described and everyone was in character. Keep it up!

Love your story update soon

I love your writing and I think you did a really good job of this story. Would love to see a sequel. Something to add maybe would be showing a little more of Tony's guilt of Peter being hurt/targeted because of him?
I liked their relationship tho and loved the story! Can't wait to see more of your writing

You leave it like that and think we won't want a sequel? Honestly.

Yes I would totally love to read a sequel! Amazing job writing this!

i woULD lIke To sEe A SEquEL nOWwWWWW

You know, I actually really love what you've done with this story! Your writing style is great, the characters were well-written, the plot seemed thoroughly thought-out. Great job! I'd LOVE to see a sequel! Are you gonna title it "The Enemy of My Friend is Also My Enemy "? XD also, I think you'd be really good at writing a Peter/Michelle story! (Idk if you're into that sort of thing or not, so if not, you obviously don't have to, haha.) Any other Spidey story that you come up with is fair game for me to read, which really says something good about your writing XD anyway, great job overall, and I hope you continue writing on this site!

I thought that was quite an interesting way to end it and possibly a good setup for a future story.

Any chance of you doing a full blown MCU story? I'd just love to see a well-written Guardians/Avengers/Spider-Man/Dr Strange crossover. Including the Defenders (Netflix series) in there would be even more awesome.

I would love to see a sequel to this.

Ah man...I dont have any feedback I'm sorry! You just write so well I cant think of anything. I thought this was a great place to end. Execellent cliffhanger. You did really well! I hope there's a sequel! I just...I am incapable of explaining to you how flipping awesome this is! I LOVED IT!