I am so, so sorry for your loss.

Happy holidays to you!
I hope you have a wonderful time and dont rush to get that next chapters, we all can wait.
But anyways, interesting story you have here!
Poor Lucy... ;A;

I'm sorry for you loss. As I'm writing this I am trying not to wake anyone with my tears. it can be hard to lose people, I know how it feels.
your aunt seems like someone I would have liked to have met even once. It might seem strange that a stranger is crying for you, but Christmas I mean to be happy and I can't help but be sad. I may be sad but I can still say, Merry Christmas. and a happy new year.

The story is great! There's only one thing that I have to say that is kinda negative about this story and that is that the chapters are very short compared to most other fanfic. The reason I am saying this is because I want to read more of this story because I like the idea that you have for it. It's cool that the main character is Lucy instead of Natsu or Ichigo which it seems that it is something that almost all Bleach and Fairy Tail crossovers have in common. It makes for a refreshing change. I think that you are doing a great job so far and I hope that you will continue to write this story. I can't wait for the next chapter.

love love love
:).

Her world is going to come crashing down isn't it?

Cool

pls update soon.

I am excited to see the rest of this story! This first chapter was pretty good even if it was short :D

as ya damn Nagger ,to- lost revenant

its good but kinda short, but by all means continue because lost revenant is kinda good at putting in suggestion's even though they can be a little harsh

Not a bad start for a new writer, but a bit of advice; don't say 'What if' over and over again when pitching your story. It is really annoying. I can't stress just how annoying it is. An empty summery is better than it.