Reviews for Grains of Sand in the Passage of Time |
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Tear of Light chapter 4 . 6/19 Loved all of these and hope you will someday continue them. :) |
Yellow-eyed-wonder chapter 1 . 12/7/2019 Wow... this was just.. wow. I have never read anything like it. I look forward to reading the others! |
averiarose chapter 4 . 12/7/2019 Thank you for updating :) I really enjoy your writing style and hope to emulate its witty, elegant style one day |
Takayelie chapter 3 . 7/3/2018 Wow, every story is simply amazing. Very well written. |
Spooths chapter 3 . 6/21/2018 Rip in pieces. And nice to see Elsa being magical in all of these. Ice powers rule yo The Anastasia Romanov surviving had always been one of my favorite little conspiracy theory thingies. I mean, it's blatantly not true, but it's fun and harmless. |
Guest chapter 2 . 9/3/2017 Will there be a sequel to this chapter (c 2) ? There seems to be some other reasons behind Anna's visit. Not to mention that it mirrored the film. And interesting concept. What if Elsa and Anna were born as commoners. ps : I also like Luftwaffe Elsa and wished it could be expanded into a longer story. |
gkmoberg1 chapter 1 . 9/3/2017 Mir gefällt deine neue Geschichte von Elsa und Anna. This is a very intriguing opening! I am a little worried on how Elsa became a Luftwaffe pilot; the Nazis were horrible. Yet this is but the first chapters so I'm sure there will be more. Good intertwrining of WWII's ariel dogfights with its advanced murderous machinery with the slow agrarian life that yet existed then in England. The characters fit their origins and the progression -minus Elsa's magic of course- fits that time. I've a small handful of suggestions but am not sure what you're after for critique - your storytelling is its usual wonderful flow. Kudos on a great start! |
Spooths chapter 2 . 9/2/2017 My first reaction was "awww" despite all of the people that does horrifically. I hope you keep going with these! I hope we get all the cool AUs. Time travel and aliens, and pirates, and Romans, and shit. How about one where Anna is a new arrival to Australia back when it was a Penal Colony and she meets Elsa and then ?, PROFIT? That'd be cool. Always, nice work as always. I Remain, Spooths |
ImaginationIsland chapter 1 . 8/18/2017 I love it. I love these kinds of AUs, where the setting is from historical periods of time. Pls add another chapter/s about this. Plssssssss. 3 |
Spooths chapter 1 . 8/15/2017 I enjoy Nazi Elsa more than I should. Especially considering the current political climate. Ah well. That was a good chapter. I look forward to other cool scenarios you have dreamed up! I Remain, Spooths |
Darthvaderisnotme chapter 1 . 8/13/2017 Perfect in every way, great one shot, ¿will this be a series? Because I want more like this :) |
punky32 chapter 1 . 8/12/2017 Wonderful would love more of this story! |
Holland92 chapter 1 . 8/12/2017 Loved this so much, is there any chance we could get a second chapter? Would adore that so much. Peace |