I was doing so good not to cry the entire book! And then BAM! Sobbing. You are an phenomenal author

this was an absolutely great story I like that very much and it sucks that bumblebee had to die. anyways still great story absolute good read.

My God.
I could not avoid reading until the end and you broke my heart, however I can say that it is beautiful.

That is one of the worse of wars to face a fear

I just finished the final chapter in tears and it takes a lot for me to cry... This story was amazing great job

Oh. My. Sweet baby Jesus! I have only ever cried this hard over one other character death ever and that was Sirius Black's death in Order of the Pheonix (the book) oh my God my heart has been stomped into itty bitty pieces! This was a magnificent story, my hat off to you my friend. Very well written, and it held my attention the entire time. (Very hard to do I might add. I am VERY picky when it comes to the things I read) I didn't even want to go to sleep until I finished this. UGH! How do I go on with my life now?

You are such a time suck. Another long story. I have Rampage and the new Lost in Space to do this weekend, but NO, I found another long story by you I haven't read. I do need to sleep sometime. So when are you posting to AO3 so I can download it? AO3 has me spoiled.

Oooh~! I love the dramatic ending that Mattie wasn’t expecting to see. I love how you incorporate the flow of the story to twist this way and that. I never know what direction you’re trying to lead it to which makes the story so refreshing to read from other’s fics.

Oh my goodness, CADE~! TF, man?! And honestly, I loved Bee’s reaction because it’s so different from others’ fanfics where the couple hit it off with no problems, and I’m just like... *facepalm x infinity* lmao, so I’m really enjoying your story. I love how complicated things are getting. Great job!

Ok... So this story officially killed me... I can't even put it into words. I think I should have turned and ran after chapter 38, so I wouldn't be sitting here bawling my eyes out at 5 in the morning, after binge reading this entire story overnight when I should have been sleeping... I just couldn't put it down! Your writing is absolutely amazing, and even though this ending kind of sucked, I loved the entire story.

I have spent a year finding another Bee/OC story worth reading. I’ve been on this website for years and the quality bee stories have fell off the last 2 or 3 years and many don’t even update anymore. When I came across your story, I fell in love immediately. The idea that you didn’t use a holoform and be unique personality you have Bee was so good. The story was well thought out and the character development was so well written. I LOVED this story and you gave me a FANTASTIC Bee story to read when I never thought I’d find another one. You’ve even reawakened the desire for me to write more Bee/OC. I’m currently also an emotional wreck. I’m sobbing, crying my eyes out.

. Ahh sad ending but we'll done.

*tears* Oh, oh I'm misty eyed. Poor Mattie, poor Bee. Man not the ending I was hoping for but still an awesome story none the less.

Can't wait for your next masterpiece!

OUTSTANDING! HEARTWARMING! ROMANTIC!

Well THAT was a depressing end to the story. Sheesh, after all that and he up and dies? Kind of makes me think the whole thing with Bee and Mattie was pointless. Honestly, the last chapter would have been just fine on its own. It was a lot happier, at any rate.

AHHH you've shattered my heart! Ack the pain X.x

I'll go back a chapter and pretend its the last one and remain in a happy-in-denial place.

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