I fucking loooove this crossover this is my second time reading it and probably not my last

Great crossover story! Enjoyed it a lot!
Really good ending to this. I wouldn’t mind a sequel if you decide to make one though.

I take back what I said in my last comment... you're a fgreat writer in every way...
I have nothing but praise for your writing and can't wait to catch up to the rest of the story

I love how you wrote the chapter but I hate the way you killed her off( I dont mean that you did it in a bad way or anything... you wrote it great I just love her character so seeing her die and the way the gang reacts to it almost made me cry)
while I understand why and kind of like the way you ended the chapter I hate that you didn't write the rest of guilds reaction in a more detailed way...
dont get me wrong I love the ending but I'm also one of those people that just want to know.
anyways love the chapter and can't wait to read the rest of the story

most amazing story everrr!

Just finished, and for the most part, I thought this was an enjoyable story. I thought that Lucy's character development was realistic considering all she went through, and I thought Grimmjow was also well done. And while the overall plot did follow the main Bleach storyline I thought you added in enough of your own stuff to keep it interesting.

I did notice a couple of oddities... nothing that really bothered me too much, but figured I'd mention them. I think that the entire story taking place over a single year was too short. I haven't read Bleach in a while, but I'm fairly certain that the Hollow cycle, from regular hollow, to Menos Grande, to Adjuchas was supposed to take a long, long time. Now with the souls in Earthland having magic, I think it makes sense to get Lucy into the Menos Grande class fairly quickly. But Bleach seems to imply that it could take decades for a Menos Grande to become an Adjuchas, if it even had the potential. I think Lucy evolving into a Menos Grande and her roaming the desert with Grimmjow should have taken at least five years before Aizen showed up. I also think it would have made a bigger impact to see her back from the dead when she revisited Earthland. It's not like this really affected the story, but it just made the time frame feel a little rushed.

Another thing I noticed (and which I had at first assumed was a typo), was Aizen needing 100 souls in your story in order to evolve. I think in Bleach canon, he actually needed 100,000 souls.. and it wasn't to evolve, but to re-create the key that would open the door into the spirit kings domain. He was able to evolve using the Hogyoku just by merging with it and buying time. I thought it was an interesting spin on things, but I did find it very confusing for a couple of chapters until I figured out that you had changed Aizen's goals somewhat.

The third oddity I noticed, and honestly enjoyed, was how you turned the Captain Commander into a doting old grandfather figure instead of the hard-ass military general he is. Thought it was pretty amusing.

And a small complaint: I know the meetings that kept being held in Hueco Mundo were to set up the revelation that Aizen was simply screwing with Lucy for the fun of it, and that her input wasn't actually needed. That being said, I found myself agreeing with Grimmjow in that reading about constant meetings wasn't really that interesting. Definitely my least favorite part of this story. Thought it would have been more interesting to have Lucy meet up with some of the Numeros and kind of just explore the world of Hueco Mundo a bit more.

To add on to that, I think it's a shame that Neliel seemed to have been completely forgotten about. Think you could have worked that into the epilogue considering that Nnoirita seemed like he was going to be the next problem they delt with, and his story also revolves around Neliel.

Lastly, I'd like to apologize for being overly harsh in my last review. While I still don't like the way the infiltration mission was done, I did think the following chapters were handled pretty well. And I realized later that you just needed a way for Lucy to come to the realization that Aizen was the one who killed her instead of Gin. And in the end, it didn't really play a large part in the story and wasn't a big issue.

Anyway, thanks for writing!

Ive been enjoying this so far, but i don't think this chapter makes any sense. Removing all of Lucy's memories from when she went to the afterlife would, as far as Aizen and co know, remove ALL of her memories. She would essentially be suffering from full blown Amnesia, since she *shouldn't* have any memories from when she was alive either. This being the case, how the hell are they expecting her to gather intel on Ichgo, even if Aizen left her with Ichigo's name in her mind?

And from Ichigo's perspective, he's going to find an unconscious girl dropped off right next to where they know a hollow portal was, who can't remember *anything* except his name. Yea, that's not suspicious at all.

But to further complicate matters, Ulquiora is going to be watching her to monitor her. And he, as well as Aizen when he reports back, are going to be expecting Lucy to act like a full blown Amnesiac. But she isn't going to act like that, because she *does* still have her memories from when she was alive. So obviously she's going to be found out about remembering her past life.

And lastly, why was removing her memories even necessary in the first place? She's doing this to get Grimmjow his rank back, there is literally no benefit, nor does she have a reason, to spill secrets to Ichigo and friends. The same people who *just* killed her other friends.

This chapter was a mess.

And im half convinced that there is going to be some full blown angst coming up. If Lucy suddenly decides to stay in the human world and "abandon" Grimmjow/Aizen and co, and there's some contrived reason that they dont just give her her sword/memories/hollow powers back, im just gonna bail.

This was a well-written crossover, the story had excellent storytelling and character backgrounds. I would have never pegged Lucy to be a hollow in her afterlife...but under these conditions, you made a believable character arc.

I would have made my own door.

Well ole Grimmy is about to find out how much Lucy hates Shinigami

I truly enjoyed this very much and I may/Mau not have shed a tear or few every now and then...but I did grin and laugh and alot of parts. My wishful thinking is hoping for a sequel but that's not entirely up to me so meh to me lol. But for some miracle if there's any than HELL F-BOMB YAY!

Holy. Shit. Lemme just say- I have an unfinished ikea dresser on my floor because I started this shit. It's not 4 am in the morning and I just finished binge reading the best shit I have ever fucking read. You have a serious talent with plots and characters and you can bet your ass I enjoyed reading it! I CRIED! Your story made me cry and laugh at my screen! I sincerely hope that you continue to write whenever you can because it seriously is a gift to make such a unique story flow like this. :)

the best read I've had so far. it is amazing and fits together so well. I would love to see more lucyxgrimmjaw because they work together so well. I would love to see more of this one too. like how does Lucy rule and how strong does the bond get.
it would also be awesome for y9u to go through some of the other bleach cause it would be amazing to see how the espadas left to it all especially if they help out the shinigami when they get invaded..
I apologise. o am now addicted to your works

This HAS to be the BEST fanfic crossover story I have ever read! Considering I'm a big fan of fairy tail LOL. I'm so happy I gave this story a chance based on the great summary. Like I love ️ this story soooo much I plan to re-read it a couple time. The growth in the character development was just amazing!
Also I'm happy the story didn't have any lemons. I just feel like it wouldn't fit in. Plus who has the time.

im very happy with how this ended thank you and well done