Reviews for Young Anti-Fairies
Gothic-Angel342 chapter 23 . 8/6
I wonder when hes going to realize Cosmos the idiot and not him
swalublue chapter 22 . 7/24
So far I think this is the closets to a FOP Prequel that could actually fit into the cannon. I would say 7/10 to much water
Guest chapter 22 . 6/16
Well, this chapter was kinda weird. But weird doesn't mean bad, in fact i really enjoyed reading it, but i want to know: is the fairy from the broadcast gonna be an important charecter in future chapters? Or will we at least know their identity?
That's all the questions i have for now.
Btw, i wish you would've seen my face when i saw how you mentioned my last review on your A/N, well anyway i'll be waiting for the next one!
Guest chapter 21 . 5/17
I really loved reading this, anti cosmo's dialogue simply cracks me up! I find it funny how he dwells on something that happened thousands of years ago. I liked Foop in this aswell, though I'm starting to miss anti cosmo's classmates and his dynamic between them. it would also be funny to see anti cosmo and his mom interact since he hates her so much, but in any case you did a really good job and your chapters are really worth the wait!
FountainPenguin chapter 21 . 5/16
I really enjoyed this one! I loved seeing Foop again, and going accidentally overboard on a school project he doesn't even care about in the first place sounds perfectly in character for him. I particularly loved how cold young Anti-Cosmo was to Foop when he went back in time; the dialogue where Anti-Cosmo judges Foop's rhetoric but completely ignores everything Foop is actually saying made me laugh. Very well done.

You really paint Anti-Cosmo out to be this egomaniac who doesn't understand why he has no friends, and you make it so obvious WHY he doesn't have friends. He's not just some kid who gets bullied for no reason... he's an absolutely egotistical, cruel, selfish BRAT and I love that. When he's regularly seen alongside Anti-Wanda it's easy to forget how mean he can be, so I enjoyed this small peek at how he comes off to an outsider. He's brutal and I appreciate Foop's strength in dealing with him... Most people would give up or snap at Anti-Cosmo, but Foop manages to hold his tongue because he DOES respect them as his parents (and is trying not to ruin the past again, but-) and I thought that was well done. I also loved Foop's plan to visit the past and just erase people's memories, and I thought it was funny that it didn't work out.

Great chapter! Can't wait to learn more about Anti-Schnozmo, and I really enjoyed Anti-Blonda's relationship with Foop too. You can tell she's softer than her counterpart... and I really loved that "Or, instead of destroying school property, you could just stop using [the time travel device] bit. Wonderful humor as usual!
FountainPenguin chapter 20 . 4/14
Sorry it took me so long to read this! I thought it was really cool to see this nice long update. I really enjoy the adventures of these little miscreants, and Anti-Cosmo's relationship with his brother is fascinating... especially since he insisted to Foop that he didn't have a brother.

I really enjoy your Anti-Blonda characterization, and it was cool to see a throwback cameo to an old one-off character in the show! I think you did a good job portraying him, and it was touching that he refused to give away AC's and AB's presence. It was also cool to see Anti-Cosmo face the iron even though it pained him... He's kind of a good, brave boy sometimes.

Overall, this chapter was very interesting! I really liked the plot and the effect not having good dreams had on Anti-Cosmo. Anti-Blonda's compliments getting him back to normal was fun to watch, and I just really love AC's dialogue. You do it so well.

Thanks for writing this nice chapter and I look forward to more in the future, as always!
Jet Engine chapter 19 . 3/9
I love everyone's theories about their teacher, especially Anti-Wanda's. I do not want to know how that girl's mind works.

There's nothing wrong with a "short and plotless chapter." They can be a fun way to explore the characters or, in this case, share a random yet entertaining portion of the characters' lives. :)
FountainPenguin chapter 18 . 3/4
Sorry it took so long to review this! I've been busy. It's a very nice chapter. And to answer your question about crowns in FOP, I think they're 3D. In a few episodes like "Fairly Odd Baby," when Cosmo is holding Poof right after he's born, the angle is just right to see all the points :)

This chapter was very cute and I loved hearing Anti-Wanda's perspective on her friend. I really like your take on Anti-Fairy culture and its views of bad luck, fairness, and opposites. "He can enjoy both!" was just a really adorable thing for her to say when Cupid tries to convince her Anti-Cosmo is more interested in taking over Anti-Fairy World than spending time with her.

I will admit that I was a little confused by the end of the story, though. I'm not sure what kind of gel Cupid had on him or why he put it on their mouths or why he was okay with forcing them to kiss against their will, but maybe that will be explained later. It was a very cute chapter overall and I love that conversation between Anti-Cosmo and his brother at the end when AC asks "Do you think Anti-Wanda would want to do it again?" They're pretty cute and you do an excellent job with their personalities and friendship.

Great work as usual! Can't wait for more stories about these guys in the future!
Guest chapter 10 . 2/13
I outsist that this is stupid and weird.
FountainPenguin chapter 17 . 1/14
It's great to see another update! And this was a delightful one. Stories that delve into character's fears, especially in situations where they're forced to face them, are some of my favorites. I enjoy getting to know more about the side characters- you do a great job of fleshing them out.

As always, I thought your sense of humor was super on-point. You have a real knack for that, and silly bits of dialogue like "somehow got stuck in the soccer nets despite the day's activity being basketball" or a simple "I like plates" always make me laugh. Excellent balance of drama and humor.

I love the way Anti-Cosmo and Anti-Wanda play off each other as they slowly become more of a team. I like the slow way they're distancing themselves from their classmates, and it makes me wonder how these other kids will be in the future.

This was great! Thanks for sharing your work and I look forward to more!
Jet Engine chapter 16 . 6/11/2019
I love baking, so this one was extra fun for me! I feel so bad for Matt, though. If only he'd given her cooking a chance. Not that I blame him. I probably wouldn't wanna eat it either. ;)
FountainPenguin chapter 15 . 1/7/2019
Always fun to have an episode of potentially evil cute and fluffy toys... Definitely feels like a cartoon. A rogue pixie on a budget was certainly not the antagonist I was anticipating, but it works very well. I wonder if his future plans involve stuffing Giggle Pies in cereal boxes.

Nice to see young Wanda locking horns with Anti-Cosmo, and it looks like even Anti-Blonda may be warming up to A.C. bit by bit. And I do like how you include Anti-Schnozmo in this story, even if it's just quick glimpses sometimes. It's nice that you included him as part of Anti-Cosmo's life and didn't just forget Schnozmo existed. I love how he got sent to detention for letting people cheat off HIM... That sounds exactly like something Schnozmo's opposite would do.

(P.S. I really liked today's cover art, by the way... Young Anti-Cosmo is too cute to resist.)
Jet Engine chapter 15 . 1/6/2019
Something tells me it really was mind control. Also, it was fun to watch the dynamic between Anti-Cosmo and Wanda, and I hope this means we get to see more of that.
Jet Engine chapter 14 . 12/2/2018
Everyone had some very good points. I loved hearing everyone's opinion on "naughty" and "nice" behavior. It gave us a fun little peek into how their minds work.

And, I'm sorry, but... When Anti-Cosmo talked about "killing all the humans," I kind of thought of Bender from Futurama. Not sure if you're familiar with that show, but yeah. That's where my brain went. :P
FountainPenguin chapter 14 . 12/2/2018
I really enjoyed this chapter. Very interesting concepts and discussions going on here, and lots of fascinating exchanges. Everyone's personalities really shone through in this one. I loved hearing the different worldviews, especially Anti-Cosmo's and Anti-Wanda's- and how defensive they were of those perspectives.

Ms. Magister is the worst teacher, but she cracks me up. And I liked it when she translated Dillan's sign language... and when Anti-Cosmo insisted that because she repeated his comment aloud, she must agree with it. And I like how he calls her Ms. Teacher, haha.

Great chapter, and perfect with winter just around the corner. I'm glad Maria has a sweet view of the holiday, at least :)
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