You need to fix this chapter. It looks like you copy and pasted a bunch of times and jumbled the plot.

I really really enjoyed this story. The ending was a little anti-climatic but still enjoyable. Thanks for writing!

Super enjoyable read! I liked Draco’s time in the muggle world. Too many Dramione fics just make Draco’s changed beliefs based soley on his love of Hermione.

Beautifully written and one of the best dramione developments I’ve read!

what a bittersweet ending. I mean, in one hand, happiness because Voldy is gone and Dramione together. the other hand, the crushing rejection by his parents, Dracos mental collapse ... heart wrenching stuff.
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aside for the need to go through and do a thorough spell check (as well as remove a duplicate section of text in the scene with Narcissa at the Manor) there is nothing to change that would improve this story. I read it all in a day, barely stopping for sleep. I really enjoyed it

Enjoyed reading this. Was well written and enjoyed Draco experiencing the muggle world. Good story line

Hey there is something really weird about chapter 41. Almost like it restarted big chunks of the story. I would just reread and edit down the identical paragraphs.

This fic is beautiful, a great story with good layers and I have been completely caught up in it! You definitely should have more comments, follows and favs!
However, that being said, I have just a few error corrections. Please take a look at chapter 41 again, it seems to be copy-pasted twice. And please change Zambini to Zabini. It sort of stings my eyes and remind me of a circus when I see it.
There are a few smaller things too but when I read it, I can overlook that due to the compelling fic you've written! Thank you so very much for sharing this with us!

If you wouldn't mind proofreading a bit it would greatly improve the story. There are words missing here and there, Es and Ss dropped at the end of words.
Like in that scene it says "normally that would have worked on Lucius" when you meant "would NOT have worked"
At one point. Hermione couldn't "breath" when you meant she couldn't "breathe"
Things like that throughout the whole story

You have to re-upload this chapter. It's all mangled. When they are in the room the scene when the wall drops starts again. When Draco is about to leave the room that scene is repeated again.

I thought this story was fantastically well written. There were a few weird formatting things but the story itself was phenomenal. I frequently don't comment on stories however I felt I needed to for this one. This is definitely the best Dramione I have ever read. I thought you captured the essence of the characters beautifully. The style of the story reminded me so much of the books and that made me very happy. You took your time to really get the details right and didn't force the relationship. I look forward to reading more from you in the future.

It was a good story but I felt like the ending was lack luster. You could've mane this story into a two parter with the about all 4 of them searching for the horcruxes. But I LOVE the relationship between hermione and Draco here it's really organic.

I really liked that ending...and if it had ended with Narcissa turning a 180 and renouncing blood purity and Voldemort, it would have felt a bit too much like wish fulfillment. This way was more realistic to me. I do wish we had heard a bit more about who had died (if there were any changes), but aside from that, I think this chapter covered everything I wanted to know. The entirety of Hermione and Draco’s relationship was very believable. I’m glad you didn’t rush them into it. Thanks for giving us such a great story!

Hah, I really liked Ron in this chapter! Very true to his character in canon.

Okay, I get why Draco, Hermione, Harry, and Ron didn’t have any of the anti-Cruciatus/pain potion...the whole reason Draco went to Dumbledore is because his mother ran out of potion and he couldn’t make any more because he couldn’t get the ingredients. But come the fuck ON! The Order shouldn’t have had that problem. The Order DIDN’T have that problem! They would have had a supply of the potion and the fact that Dumbledore didn’t have Lupin, Kingsley, and Tonks take it is baffling to me. Mind-boggling, really. We know they didn’t take it because Lupin went down by a Crucio and Tonks and Kingsley definitely felt pain when they got hurt too. So why, knowing they were going into danger, did the Order not take the freaking potion made expressly for that purpose?! And why, with Snape telling them there would be eight Death Eaters, did only four of the Order go? Wouldn’t it have been common sense to have at least five-seven, if not a matching eight people? And why didn’t Mad Eye Moody join? I don’t see him just sitting out of this. He’s been gunning for Lucius Malfoy and the Death eaters for ages. He totally would have pushed to go. And he’s still alive...I mean, in canon he didn’t die until the 7th book during the battle of the seven Potters. Just many, many questions for the Order. It’s too bad Hermione wasn’t included in the planning process or I’m sure she would have pointed out those glaring flaws. Sorry, not a flame for you as the author; just trying to comprehend the short-sightedness of the Order.