Reviews for Hero of the Dark
Night Shadow76 chapter 8 . 8/12
I love this story, I don't see enough The Darkness fics to sate my hunger for carnage and this would make me fat if it were food. I've honestly read this enough to lose track, and so I can say how I love how you basically said 'Fuck this Shite' and removed the feud between The Darkness and the Angelus by putting them in the same host while also just making Naruto The Darkness and Angelus themselves. I always did prefer fics that involves the two working together thanks to their hosts' close bond, or the two at the least knowing they need each other in order to exist.

However I have to ask about the list. I'm fine with pretty much all of it, but Tia Dalma? Is her crime gonna be explained in the coming chapters or is she just not a character you like much and want an excuse to off her? No big if the second, just curious since I always thought she was a decent character how had a bad hand given her relationship with Davy Johns.
cmech54 chapter 8 . 8/12
You are a genius. And I love it! I haven’t seen several of these new crossovers, but the story you are weaving is incredible and captivating. I look forward to the next chapter.
InuLamar chapter 8 . 8/12
Epic chapter keep it up!
fallendemon248 chapter 8 . 8/12
Alright let’s see how this hunt goes
darkarchangel09 chapter 8 . 8/12
dude. fantastic work. the history and plot so far all work together unlike some other major cross fictions. keep it up. cant wait for the next chapter!
Primarx chapter 8 . 8/12
a rather long chapter with quite a few unknown characters for me. enjoyed reading it though
demon87 chapter 8 . 8/12
super
kerry.wallace40 chapter 8 . 8/12
Why tia dalma(calypso)? Great read keep it up.
Omni-Creator Kami of Anime chapter 8 . 8/12
Damn, you really don’t hold back do you, in regards to darker stuff and larger crossovers, do you?
I’m not necessarily opposed to an increasing level of mass crossovers (although it would be better if it ensured the hottest females are GUARANTEED to be with Naruto, and that Naruto’s place in the apparent Omniversal Powerscaling isn’t dropped further down), but I hope you know what you’re doing and that you’re properly planning this out beforehand rather than simply making this up as you go at the spur of the moment.
Because while I don’t want to necessarily question your skills as an author, but these ever-expanding X-overs have a tendency of being messy and potentially out-of-control and contradictory in nature if they’re not properly planned and mixed together well beforehand.

I don’t necessarily have a problem with the darker aspects of your stories or the increasing level of kinkiness, but i asl again that you please stay AWAY from the more “excessive” stuff when it comes to smut or lemons (using clones in sex, tentacles. Futa She-Male stuff, etc), for both this story AND your other ones.
It’s just becomes so hollow in terms of satisfaction pretty quickly (for both the readers AND even the authors inevitably), it’s classified as “lazy writing” and usually marks the decline of quality in writing, and it defeats the purpose of having a harem (even if some of the females are actually servants or casual lovers rather than actual lovers).
If Naruto is truly the “Ultimate Lover and Alpha Male” and the “Ultimate BAMF”, then he should be able to satisfy his near-infinite number of lovers singlehandedly without such excessive measures, and if necessary he can encourage the females to have a “little fun with each other” if necessary to temporarily satisfy their own needs when Naruto is unavailable (but WITHOUT using tentacles or forming a Futa She-Male dick or whatever).
I know I keep asking this, and I know you really don’t like when people essentially tell you how to write (and I’m sorry if I overstepped, for the record), and I also know you’ve answered in the past something akin to “I’ll do as I feel is necessary for each of my stories, even if it means occasionally doing those ‘excessive/questionable things’”, but I just can’t help but ask anyway.
People get too easily tempted into that stuff, especially whenever Naruto or Magic is involved.
Besides, firmly staying AWAY from that stuff might give you the necessary challenge and motivation to make NEW creative ways for Naruto to have fun all by himself without such “excessive measures”.
I don’t want to sound like one of those annoying-a**, overly-demanding readers, but please just think about it.

Please update soon!
Arraia chapter 8 . 8/12
Perfect and update soon please
Naruto x harem
Naruto x konan
OmniUIShaggyOverexaggerated chapter 8 . 8/12
Reaper, Buddy Boi! You really killed it with this chapter.
So Naruto is the creator of magic in this reality? I pity the magical fools that try to outdo him with magic, since he controls all of magic literally and conceptually as well. The Bennett witch clan must have thrived tremendously in this AU of TVD/TO/L thanks to Qetsiyah drinking Naruto's blood making the witches/(warlocks if there were any not that I know of) born from this bloodline stronger than most or all witch clans in Mystic Falls, New Orleans or any other part of Planet Earth. The individuals listed as targets by Naruto are familiar faces, barring Bible Black as I know little about the ero video game and anime series. The supernatural laws were created by Naruto, and a lot of people broke those laws. This is not gonna end well. Matt and Tyler are killed, which I'm not too broken about, Elena and Esther are punished as sex slaves, which is fitting considering their actions, especially the latter who betrayed the father of her children by turning Mikael Mikaelson into an Original Vampire and tried to strip Naruto Uzumaki of his Angelus and Darkness immortality and powers, which was an absolute failure since Naruto saw it coming and it would have never worked anyways. Superman is insistent on Naruto having a weakness even though Constantine repeatedly stated that he has none unless God Almighty says otherwise. Is Diana Naruto's daughter through Hippolyta? Seems to be the case.
Home of the Brave chapter 8 . 8/12
Thank you for the update. I don't mind multiple crossovers as long as they make sense when put together. You mentioned in this chapter that Mystic Falls and Louisiana were havens for the supernatural and my mind jumped towards Buffy and the Sunnydale Hell Mouth. Is there any chance during this story that Naruto will be visiting there? Also I'm jonesing for a Fast and Maelstrom update.
reptoholic chapter 8 . 8/12
enjoyed it
General13812825 chapter 8 . 8/12
Well done! The chapter was .. well i already said Well done. Take your time author and i thank you for sharing this story for us peasants that has been graced with your 'presence' .
Bladewolf101 chapter 8 . 8/12
So Diana is going to be Naruto's daughter?

Well, Rebekah is his daughter and he's clearly sleeping with her so he'll end up doing the same with Diana. I can just imagine what Hippolyta's reaction will be.
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