I loved this story.

Well Saren look help the universe problem the right way .

Dead to slavers yay.

Love this very much update soon but take your time with it

Politics you would think after hundreds if not thousands of years of lies ,treason ,betrayal ,manipulation,bribery ,blackmail and more by corporations and politions you would think we and other races would have found a means to create honest political and government leaders .instead the system has not improve in thousand of years corrupt have only gotten better at scamming and manipulation.

Interesting keep it up .

Just finished the second chapter. Interesting to see that you've struck a balance in Saren that (kind of) explains his helping the young Commander. I enjoyed your Nihlus, though brief. Its a different stroke from his game portayle, and the comic relief is tasteful and welcome. You've sold me on a CH 3. Looking forward to the next update.

An interesting angel to approach the ME 1 antagonist and protagonist. The relationship development seems a tad fast for Saren given his reputation as the human hating Spectre, unless something AU occured in his background to change the character. Ill suspend disbelief for now, and proceed to chapter 2.