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how in the world you have Cinder push luffy to gear4?

speed, strength and durability all belong to Luffy and if you add haki that difference only grows.

Luffy, Zoro and Sanji should not have had any problem with their opponent, I know it's a story but you should find a more interesting and believable way to make it a difficult fight instead of nerfing them.

But, like, Ironwood was right there.

Can't wait to see how you continue on in the next volume.

Luffy should've murdered the wyvern and he should've beaten cinder

Amazing chapter. The battles were cool.

I feel like Luffy should have been able to destroy Cinder in a fair fight.

Ozpin and Luffy are going to destroy Cinder in the coming chapters. Thank you for the new chapter and I hope you are doing well.

Can't wait for a Sanji vs Mercury man...love your story

I hope to God that Pyrrha survives because if Cinder kills her, then Luffy would go rage mode on her. Emerald and Mercury are going to pay too. There is no doubt that Zoro is going to face against Adam since they both use swords.

Please make it so that only one character speaks per paragraph. That is probably the most important rule in writing stories. Can't believe nobody told you this yet...

Zoro’s gonna kill another dragon. Isn’t he?

The invasion has started.

Cinder and her group are in for a nasty suprise.

cool