This reads like a children's book... You don't even have proper quotations let alone a proper sentence. It was a good try and a good idea... but I think you need to work on your writing skills a bit.

Hope to read more soon.

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"Ok Franky, dock there." says the pirate." Is that the sentence you were going for? Or have I read your sentence wrong? Need to proof read or get a beta reader. Trying to translate was a bit difficult. I want to know what you are writing, not guess at it. Interesting concept.

Your idea is great, I love it ! But you need to be careful when you write, words are missing, lot of grammar errors. That makes the story hard to follow... Same with the display, we get confused between speech and narration. You could use underscore when there is a conversation and quote when it's just someone saying something in a narrative paragraph. The story is promising so keep going ! I'm waiting to read the next chapter !