why is he helping randoms that have no business with him ? you keep saying its 'interesting' to force the plot every fcking time.

Like with itachi.. he has absolutely no reason to help him. The whole thing was so forced it made me sick. Just to stay on canon and have a butt budy with sasuke. Then the genjutsu thing. He has no interest in that whatsoever from what has been shown of him.. obv you are just using it to make him have her as his other teammate alongside sasuke. ofc you forced it once again and showed no reason for him to help them. He would look for the willpower in them like mihawk did to zoro. Not help a moody bitch for no reason and then randomly help another cause its 'interesting'

I've got an idea about the Devil Fruits. You don't really need to add them since people in the Naruto-verse already possess Kekkei Genkai of similar ability. The Nara with their Shadow Powers, the Akimichi with their expansion techniques, Haku with his/her Ice Release(yes I prefer to say the element and "release" as opposed to "style"). Also Mihawk as a Shichibukai should have possessed two out of three of the different forms of Haki theoretically Naruto could learn them as well.

Another thing I've been thinking about in regards to the Elemental Affinities, would it be possible to channel earth nature to make a sword denser and heavier, as well as to temporarily dull a blade? Kurotamashi actually gave me an interesting idea with coating a blade with Fire Nature, cutting a person and automatically cauterizing the wound.

great story cant wait for more :)

I hope ya keep on your current progress with ya story. I am enjoying the plot line especially with ya using Ami and Yugao.

hope you continue this i want to see more

Just finished reading, and I have to say that it’s a great story!

I like the progression speed, not too fast or to slow (where many writers fall into the trap of needless detail), no overuse of flashbacks (they’re great when they’re brief, not so when long), an appropriate progression and explanation of Naruto’s strength, getting out of that Team 7 rut, and new character focuses (I.E. not Sasuke, Sakura, and Kakashi).

Also, things that help keep reader intrest are new missions, helpful for character progression and allows more freedom for the writer to take the story where they want.

Overall, keep up the good work! Looking forward to more!

Love it

The anbu could be kushimaru another former seven swordsman

MOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEE!

Great story I really liked it good job writing the story please continue it soon.

Mihawk without haki. WTF!

Update ASAP AWESOME work!

another cliche story again ...
this story may be interesting if made into a darker story.

boring ... I just scroll and scroll again ... and guess what? ... I give up.

Nice chapter