Wow! That’s gotta be my favourite of all your work. Kara practically lives and breathes, she feels that real. I love the plot and I’m really looking forward to seeing where you’ll take this.
Thank you so much for all your hard work and keeping this fandom active.

Fascinating! I cannot wait to see how all that DNA research on Kara comes into play in the upcoming adventures! More! Hurry!

Poor Ianto! Never took him for a man with a weak tum-tum!

Kara truly is her fathers' daughter. Amazing.

Oh! Switching to current tense made this chapter so much more intense! Yeah, Kara!

Oh my Lord, I would not like to be in whomever's shoes! This is getting so very exciting yet again! It's like a roller coaster with you, woman!

Dang but Ianto can be ruthless! I would have thought that Jack would be the one who exercised the hand of torture. I am thoroughly impressed.

Wait! When do we find out about the Time Agents?! Who ordered them to kidnap Kara? Why?

Can't wait for part 2 to kick off...

Don't leave us waiting forever for Part 2! Brilliant endingand I'm waiting with baited breath for the next installment! D.

Poor Ianto...just his luck to get jump-sick.

are sooo very screwed.

Uhhh, not sure Kara should have killed the woman but hey, what do I know? Waiting anxiously for her to be found by her fathers!

The Time Agency made the biggest mistake they could make.

Go get em fellas! How dare they hurt Kara!