Gosh! I both loved this and hated it! Like I loved it bevause it’s so well done, and beautiful, and fantastic, but i hate it because she’s dead, makes me so sad. Ugh, but it was so well done, like incredible one shot breaking all the way and putting it back together.

very well written.
you should write one where she becomes a knight and that maybe she is never expelled.
I have yet to see a story where she remains in the order and takes an apprentice later on. maybe even becomes a master

Well Done,Well Done,Well Done,
Very well written.
I enjoyed this chapter

You made me cry, I don't know why, but you made me cry.

Interesting concept, I like how Ahsoka was able to save Anakin from falling to the Dark Side.

I must agree, this is a great story. Speechless.. It's just wonderfully written.

This was a really awesome story!

This was fantastic! A suggestion could be when making the character speak use " at the beginning and at the end of the paragraph

It's a great story