Reviews for Black Hearts
Patresa chapter 2 . 7/7
This version of Black Hearts could have saved us a lot of broken hearts, that's for us.
Maharadaffny chapter 2 . 5/24
Linda historia. Me gustó mucho, escribes increíble, seguiré leyendo tus historias.
AprilVV chapter 2 . 12/10/2019
OMGGGGGG! This was so fucking amazing! I didn't know that there were still people who writed about The Mentalist. What a nice surprise 33333
Random shipper chapter 2 . 7/26/2019
This one turned me in à puddle if goo, one thing I love us when a fanfictions mixes canon elements and episodes in the story it makes it feel more real and it's awesome loved everything !
Jisbon28 chapter 2 . 7/27/2019
A great shot!
MaraFreila chapter 1 . 6/25/2018
Good Story, I hope for a sequel!
Jaylie's Ink chapter 2 . 2/26/2018
God I hadn't read a Mentalist fic for YEARS and I suddenly felt the urge to... Glad I found yours. Thank you !
Guest chapter 2 . 11/4/2017
Loved it! Feel free to continue on this thought thread.
breath-of-spring chapter 2 . 9/5/2017
Love this so much. Thank you for writing it!
mayzee chapter 2 . 9/5/2017
Nice conclusion, thanks for writing.
Munkeyfump20 chapter 2 . 8/28/2017
I hope there is going to more to this story but thanks for a very good read if there is more I will look forward to the next instalment and link.
gscott62 chapter 1 . 8/27/2017
I would have loved if this really happened in the show. You captured Jane and Lisbon beautifully. Jane, telling her he meant his " love you" before he fake shot her, but still not telling her how meaningful these words are in the present. So Jane, and so Lisbon to think he probably doesn't. Lisbon's thoughts about how many things do you need to love about a person before it adds up to real love was amazing. Liking another's good qualities because it is easy doesn't necessarily mean real love. You had her come to this realization. So wonderful. I must read your next chapter.
half agony and hope chapter 2 . 8/27/2017
This was simply incredible - it was SO well done. I'm really happy that you didn't have them get together right at the end of part 1. Instead, you wrote a natural falllout, which seems more realistic. I also loved that Lisbon clearly knows her own mind in this version. And the ice cream date was perfect. Bravo - truly excellent work!
Idan chapter 2 . 8/27/2017
This made me so happy. From Jane's "personality transplant" to the airing of grievances, it felt completely right, a satisfying resolution to the initial avoidance that echoed canon. Lisbon's conclusion that they just need to keep fighting was both funny and profoundly true. Thanks so much for this!
Guest chapter 2 . 8/25/2017
Excellent!
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