So is this story dead? you should continue writing it as it was very good.

хмм чет как то Халкегинию сливаете быстро(хотя она посильнее оригинала будет..эххх лан удачи в совершенствовании творчества автор)

странный момент когда Сайто блювал(ну бля эт ложь чистой воды или ошибка автора) насчет магов(надеюсь их не занерфят по самые гланды, а то фанфик сразу скатится на дно(по логике если дать время магам то они должны как минимум на равных с вторженцами быть(а то и превосходить даже в лобовых сражениях(когда подготовятся)нус еще надеюсь Сайто не сольют до ОЯШа(пусть пацан будет нормальным)

god damn this is great Saito needs a bit more involvement though maybe a homecoming arc where he and the crew have to escort Henrietta through Japan and gets to see his parents again...

Lelei se parese a thabita :v

it good story cant wait for the new chapter

I just finally finished reading the first 13 chapters. I hope you figure out how this story will end in the short future. (Ahhhh...3 months from now...or so). Damn writer's block. I really loved this story.

Take your time if you ned assistant just PM

thanks for effort, I enjoy this fic. enjoy your break.

(Still here too, don't worry. Just lazy in reviewing multiple chapters).

Well let's see... [ typing something ] When's the Last time you have updated... [ going through this story's [ Reviews ] page ]

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[ user: Boyzilla chapter: chapter 13 date: 05/23/2019

"Another fantastical chapter! I love the moments with Countess Myui, you’ve really made her a character in this game of politics and war. Always appeciate more Louise moments too, she’s a fun character. Not to mention Itami’s reactions and also, while being an otaku, his military professionism keeps him in line like in the source material.

I hope to see more of Tiffina in the future as she represents some good potential scenes with the UNTF. Also more Saito and his brother." ]

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Ah yes: (05/23/2019) author!...

[ lets out a tired sigh... ]

Well, try to come back here when you're ready again. If not then don't be afraid to let someone you know or any being well-versed with the Gate or/and ZNT series taking this story over in your stead if this would no longer continue in your hands. [ tries to reassure ]

Keep this up.

Be Brave. And... Have Faith... [ carefully said ]

a esperar entoce

No problem

That cool dude take your time.

take you time man

It's ok. Story is good do far. Just some bad grammar if you don't pay attention to how it comes out if you're not rereading it.