This is one of my favorite stories I have ever read.

Tony's Thanksgiving speech was perfect for nearly every family. Since Flash hasn't been mentioned, my guess is that it is him. I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Only one English translation issue in this chapter... You run into someone; you step onto something. Well, unless one of the superheroes punches a bad guy down, then steps onto their chest.

Perfect.

I can easily envision a parent acting like Tony, being overly forgiving of actions because of why those actions are happening.

That was an effective way to manipulate Peter. I like the interactions between him and Tony, particularly the conversation on the roof after the bad guys were taken down. Vocabulary tip... The habitat is the place the inhabitants are those that live there. So the Avengers are the inhabitants of the tower which is their habitat.

Action! It's good to include conflict and action in this. I hope Pete calls the team in to help. Spelling tip... The past tense of hang is hung. Hanged is typically only used in old westerns when someone is killed by hanging, like... They hanged him from the gallows.

I like the idea of Quill and Steve meeting. Good interactions between parents and teens.

Good chapter. I know English is not your first language and I know I would make tons of mistakes if I attempted to write something in some other language. You're doing really well, but there was one word that stood out in this chapter as incorrect. The word you were looking for was thwart. Chortle is a form of laughter.

Yep, kids will act up trying to test where the barrier is and to see if anyone cares enough to put up a wall and say, of you cross this line you're in deep trouble, and there is some security in knowing someone does care enough to put a stop to poor behavior. You might like my Forbidden series, if you are Harry Potter fan. It portrays some of the same aspects.

Great start to the story! I like your Tony. Someone else is probably already brought this up to you but Spider-Man goes on patrols. Parole is a thing that happens when somebody gets out of jail and still needs to be monitored for a little while, like check in with their parole officer once a week and stay away from anybody who is doing illegal stuff.

I love this story but please tells when the next chapter will be out or if you want to end this story

Love this story but please tells when your next chapter is coming out or if you are ending this book

I love this and can't wait for another update

I really enjoyed the story! Thank you for writing it! It was very well written and I enjoyed every chapter :) I'd love to see more chapters written!

Can you do one where Peter Parker gets in a fight I love this story btw and I don’t want to try to force you to write anything so please take your time and make sure you are doing this for yourself not others