Oh, my! Things will definitely be interesting between InuKag from now on... ;)

And as much as I indulge in fics that have my OTP proceed to bang after such an intrusion, honestly, your take was much more realistic. Plus, it leaves room for sexy times in the future... ;)

I loved it... hint hint you could definately make a chapter 2 where he gets caught and he get the to actually engage in her nightly deeds with her and finish it off that way

Brilliant hot and perfect

Just finished reading this and I must say that I am certainly impressed. First of all, I must commend you for not only a really good story idea to begin with but the structure of the story flows just as well. I never felt at any moment that the events were moving too fast or too slow. Besides I think one grammar mistake, your grammar and sentence structure was spot on and I honestly can say I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Its one of those short late night reads I would like to indulge in whenever I'm having trouble sleeping or something. It was short, but sweet, cute, and worth the time. Will be on the look out for more work from you :)

i really enjoyed this One-shot! You captured Inuyasha very well, and I love that it's all one-sided! Like a hidden secret memory just for him! I look forward to the next thing you write!

Very good!

I would have had him finish her off but short and hot