There's a significant problem with Percy having a counterpart in Edolas and it's one you actually described unintentionally in this chapter. The Pantheon Gods from Percy's former world don't have DNA.

Which makes Edolas Percy an impossibility to exist. Even if he was born to a human parent, Edolas Percy would only have one strand of DNA without the other where usually that void is filled in with "Godly essence" or divinity which allows Demi-humans to live even though they only got one strand of DNA from their mortal parent.

Edolas Percy should not exist. No organism can live or survive with one strand of DNA. This brings me to my other problem with this chapter. Wendy couldn't possibly be Percy's daughter. Wendy is over 400 years old technically speaking, as she is from the past and traveled to the future along with the other Dragon Slayers. Wendy's mother was a women who lived over 400 years ago, giving birth to Wendy.

Now if you're going by parallels with Edolas counterparts...the Dragons of Edolas like Porlyusica which is Grandeeny's counterpart are humans who age normally and are mortal most likely due to the fact that the magic in Edolas was scarce and fading. Meaning Porlyusica couldn't have lived for 400 years in Edolas. Therefore, the "human dragons" didn't have a "400 year plan" to yank non-existent Dragon Slayers to the future in Edolas and send Wendy 400 years into the future. So like Edo Percy's impossible existence, Wendy being his daughter is also an equal impossibility.

So it's very hard to believe that Wendy is Percy's daughter in Earthland. Edo Percy and Edo Wendy are proof of that. They can't be related.

Will you ever upload the story "ten tailed wolf" again? I just finished reading it and it's amazing

While Percy thinks Laxus and his crew can be redeemed, I got to be honest with you; what they did was unforgivable.

Freed legitimately tried to kill Elfman.

Laxus actually tried to murder an entire town full of innocent people, not once but TWICE. The first by using the lightning lacramas hovering in the air over the town, and secondly by attempting to use Fairy Law which failed because he didn't understand how Fairy Law worked. And that’s the most significant part: Laxus activated the spell with the intent to kill everyone, not just to the people in Fairy Tail. He was going to kill innocent people simply because of his own ego and anger. A spell so potent and powerful that he believed that it would murder everyone in town, to the point that he was visibly confused and angry when it didn’t work.

In a lot of ways, Laxus is just as bad as Jellall was if not worse. Laxus actually tried to kill his ...family.

By all rights Laxus should be in jail for premeditated attempted murder and mass genocide. Being banished from Fairy Tail guild is a love tap on the wrist, that is too tame. Which is why I don't agree with Percy trying to bring him back into the Guild. That's a NO NO for me fam.

I really do wish we were dealing with a younger Percy but at the very least we're getting into some of the arcs with other powerhouses so it should get more interesting.

I really love this story. A unique concept and one of the best crossover stories I’ve read. I hope that when Percy has to fight Precht and Ultear that he doesn’t get pushed around since he doesn’t have Backbiter. I mean after all he is essentially op without it. Also hope that somehow he doesn’t get stuck on Tenrou for the seven years if that part of the arc still happens. I think it would be way too detrimental to his relationship with Wendy and will just cause too much unnecessary angst and cringe. I can’t wait for the next update, I know you have other stories but hopefully you’ll get to this one soon.

can slow time, rush to his enemy with sword on hand, and punch him.

why not just give him hercules's gauntlet, that sword is pretty useless on his hand. he can end it in one move by boiling zero's blood or burst his heart but instead he stand like a statue then throw a punch. typical fanfiction throw someone powerful to another universe and make them like a rookie fighting instead of a trained demigod

Hmm is it possible to merge accounts on this site or nah? If you can it might help you keep better track by having everything in one place

oh!

Jolly!

Huh?

Okay!

If u said percy can use magic artifacts could he get some kind of storage artifact to carry a shiton of water

Wonderful to see that you're still around. Was starting to worry you may have been affected by Covid. Anyways, chapter was enjoyable as always, have a great day!

Solid chapter. Part of me wants a MHA Percy Jackson crossover now.

KEEP BEING AWESOME!

Man Perxy needs to be there when Precht beats down Makarov, or even Archnologia. Don't take too long! Can't wait for more!