I love it. Please update this story. Keeping my fingers crossed.

Update?

dude why you not continue

PLS UPDATE!

I hope you continue this! I loved it a lot!

I think those two should tell others. Fairy tail is friendship power after all. They're can go stronger with help others than doing just those two

You should not put a story under complete when it very clearly isn't.

I really like the premise of this story. It's neat to see a different dynamic than usual between Natsu and Gray, and I'm curious as to the changes that will occur as a result of them knowing what is to come. Just a bit of constructive criticism, you can be a little redundant in your phrasing, but it's not a major issue; just trim up your sentences a little, leave out unnecessary words, and try to avoid repeating yourself too much. As for the pairings, I really like the Natsu/Erza pairing (there just aren't enough of those fics around), as well as the fact that it doesn't seem like just another harem-to-be story (there tends to be far too many of those). And lastly, i can't wait to see how Happy reacts to what he has just heard. Keep it up! I really want to read more.

I like the history update soon please
Pd: a question of Grey
he have devil slayer magic?

okay. *sigh* this sucks. The dialogue is stale as a month old slice of bread, whenever you're not redundant you don't finish a sentence properly. aside from Elfman everyone sounds the same; it could be Natsu talking or it could be Mira, you write them with no personality.

You showed none of the 4 years training, you showed very little of what happened at the guild while they were gone, and everyone feels bland because you don't take any time to actually write anything even close to character development.

As for the plot... it doesn't exist. you're going from one scene to the next with no plan, no connection, and painfully obvious "foreshadowing". I haven't even read chapter 6 and I can already tell you're going to go to the island, Natsu and Gray are going to beat the shit outta big bad dragon and everyone will live happily ever after. Bullshit.

This story is pointless because you don't give it a point.

*Sigh* If you want to get better work on your sentences. Stop repeating yourself. That alone would make this a thousand times better.

Regardless, good luck and hope you get better.

Nice

You know fiore's the continent they live on right? Happy searched an entire continent?

Just gonna point this out, we'd have no idea how far back they went if Grey didn't say four year training trip.

You should add nastu x erza x mira x ultear x kagura

I like that this story isn't going down into the depths of "Permanent Hiatus".

It's nice to be back reading these.