Reviews for Caught
AuntLaika chapter 4 . 1/18
The best chapter name ever
scorpion chapter 4 . 3/2/2019
This is either the fourth or fifth time I have read this and it's still comedy gold.
PAO chapter 4 . 1/26/2019
I feel as though Luan could do an entire 1 hour comedy special with nothing but sex and masturbation jokes. Good grief, there were times where I wished I was a character in that scene so i could tell her, "If you make one more God Damn masturbation joke, I'm taking your puppet and throwing him in the woodchipper!"
Guest chapter 2 . 12/28/2018
This was great
Guest chapter 2 . 12/28/2018
Sadly luan yes we do get it
Guest chapter 2 . 12/28/2018
Wait why do some of the people reviewing like to peg the sisters as the type to barge into Lincoln's room if Lori is positive that they've all seen each other when they weren't decent, doesn't that mean that lincoln has had his own fair share walking in without permission
Guest chapter 1 . 5/22/2018
Best thing I’ve ever read laughing throughout the whole story keep up the good work can’t wait for part 2
Elementor chapter 3 . 4/10/2018
THE PUNS ARE TO REAL! I CAN LITERALLY IMAGINE LUAN ACTUALLY SAYING THESE PUNS!
Elementor chapter 2 . 4/10/2018
Oh Lucy. You always make me smile with the coming out of no where.
Elementor chapter 1 . 4/10/2018
Well this is going to be a fun one to read.
Guest chapter 1 . 11/10/2017
I loved this a lot dude. I laughed at every Luan pun too, I ain't gonna lie bout that, it was good. I'm glad this got a good ending, wish it was longer, but it's good enough, good job on this.
AberrantScript chapter 4 . 9/26/2017
This story was hilarious! Luan had me laughing this whole chapter. And leave it to Leni to mistake a pen for something else and freak out. Haha. This story was actually really cute and I feel the ending was perfect. Amazing job!
Mr. Haziq chapter 4 . 9/25/2017
That was a hilariously bad situation all in all.
Guest chapter 4 . 9/25/2017
I feel like Lincoln had a lot of oppurtunities to explain himself, but other than that great job. This was uncomfortably hilarious
Gamelover41592 chapter 4 . 9/25/2017
well that was awkward and funny ending nice XD
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