I have to say this is a good light story that refreshes the brain and is thorough with the plot. The plot events are quite surprising and interesting therefore making the story increase its value. Furthermore, I like the fluff.
However, there are several plot holes, for example: Harry is extremely loyal to his friends, so your reasoning of him not interacting with them lacks.

Really well done! I really enjoyed it...even the panicking at not expecting people to like what you wrote so you didn’t have a second chapter written.

Your writing is nice and concise. While writing in another person’s world using their characters, you still put your own spin on their actions, behaviours and words.

I would love to see you branch out and crest your own world and characters. Either start with the character and place them in a situation and expand from there, or design a world and then populate it.

You write well

I’m just confused as to when they grabbed Wormtail and what was Dumbledore’s reaction to Voldie being dead and Sirius being in the castle :)

Cute

That was an interesting story. I could do without the slash but the characters and plot were well done.

I loved how they are each other's everything, and there building a new, peaceful life together that they've always wanted! I hope you write more, it would be wonderful to see what world they build for themselves. But where you ended left such a feeling of hope for the future, even without showing it!

That was fun!

Harry did not say he didn't love Draco. Draco is assuming that is what Harry meant. This is a miscommunication, right?

Great concept! The chance to go back with what you know now.
Keep up the good work!

Lol so they are both Slythendors but with high Gryffendor tendencies! Um if this works I will be amazed add to that they haven’t figured in Siriys’s Reaction to his godson breaking him out of prison either.

Please continue this story I love Drarry so much. Love your storyline!

I am really enjoying your story!:):)

Wow um I think formatting is a bit screwed up cause this chapter is unreadable.

Will Dumbledore stick his beak into things...cause after all Harry and Draco dealt with it all with no help from him so no fame will go to Dumbledore lol. Will Siriys be freed, will Peter be cause and what will happen to the Death Eaters? More please!

So hopefully all the Horcruxes including the diary and the Goblet were dealt with. It was a bit different seeing if from Dracos point of view and not Harry’s though.

So Harry isn’t going to befriend the twins but by the looks of it he is Neville?