Everything about this chapter is NAY!... Everything about this story! Is AWESOME! I love your story dude! Hope you update this soon.

You know? I really enjoy how it feels like a snippet from The Loud House. I even heard the background music for fun, and it really felt more tv like, haha. Do give us more chapters. :)

I'm excited to see next chapter! Hope you update soon! ;w;

This is such a sweet story. He's an ideal big brother. Kudos to a good fanfic.

Rather noble of Lynn. Not smart, but the thought counts.

So does Ronnie Anne want to get back together?

My sweet tooth is satisfied, nice to see link and Ronnie together again (as friends or more doesn't matter)

Good chapter! Seems like Ronnie still has a thing for Lincoln.

excellent work on this chapter and very well done also it was very sweet how he found out

Lynn, Lucy and Leni being stuck up in the tree reminds me of that one "Hey Arnold" episode. XD

I really like how you write this Lincoln. I would like to know how you make them so wholesome in such short chapters. I love how there is always something new to take your attention to another part of the story you weren't counting on. I hope you write much more for this story. :)

Great story plz make more!

I remember the time I had the death talk... *sigh*

A well done chapter. Nicely done with the mood of the chapter as Lana has her nightmare and the indecision of wanting to see Lincoln. It was quite the heavy topic that came to light for someone so young, but it was an interesting transition to show that Lana is growing up. It was understandable that Lincoln was unsure of how to approach such a topic with her, but did his best regardless. Enjoyed the conversation the two had about growing up and Lincoln wanting to prepare his sisters' for what was to come in the real world when they all grow up. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

:')

interesting