can you update this its really funny and a shirou emiya that is not set no a hero crusade is Pretty good.

It's already been at least two years since the last update and I just read through the whole thing again and I really hoping that this gets updated it's so good and it really gets my attention.

You ruined the feel of the story.

You should put some line breaks between scene changes, and cuts.

i like the cover

Nice

gold pure gold lol

This story kinda sucks. I honestly cant tell whats up with this story. Is this crack? Is this a more serious story? I dont know. It feels like you wrote a serious story then slapped crack in the summary for no reason and then edited random parts to be more 'crack,' whatever that means. This story is just offputting to read. I will now review this story as if it is a serious story, nothing but the summary tells me this is crack.

One thing that bothers me about this story is the memory sharing powers everyone has. It doesnt pop up in bloodborne or fate stay night. Its a writing device that you made up to get out of writing as much dialogue as would have been needed. Shirou does it because... i have no idea why he tells zelretch anything. He hasnt even told kiritsuga anything. In fact how does zelretch even find them? He says he sensed shirou, but across the whole planet?zelretch shows up to progress the story. And that sums up my problems with this story, all of the plot progression comes from convenient improtant people randomly showing up.

All in all this story feels like the whole point was to write about eldritch abominations transforming. All the techniques of shirou is transforming blood into weapons and the timeskips all lead to fight scenes or transformation scenes. All character interactions were skipped, all shirou learning anything were skipped. If you want to read a good eldritch abomination learning to be human (with humor) story on fanfiction for inspiration, Lusus Naturae is a good one. Its SAO where kirito turns out to be a failed alien experiment in the same vein as prototype.

Anyway, i stop here in reading your story. Good luck. Happy hunting

If he was able to "re-program" Avalon, why didn't he use it on Kiritsugu instead?

Shirou's already immortal. :(((

Please update this I need more of this story in my life

The Frosted Flakes line has me in fucking tears

I've read afew of your fanfictions and I think this is my favorite. I hope that you update it soon. Good luck.

Please update!

Please continue

Thanks for the chapter mate!