cute Story and Pairing, i like how he planed it and how draco was
hope you write more like this!

Wow great quick read! Loved it!

Oh my...that was good. I love this fic.

Oh, I do really like this fic style. It's really really sweet.

There are some things that niggle me about it, though. (It's a little bit of a shame for me- I adore the way it's written, it's just that these things are quite bothersome.) It's nothing to do with the writing- the writing and story is lovely. I absolutely love the first two paragraphs, the way you started it, and the whole. You got the characterization down pretty nicely. It's stuff to do with the canon.
But, if you like it the way it is, you needn't do anything about what it is.

And if this review really really bothers you, it's okay to delete this review or whatever. _ Or give me lovely counterarguments against these points! ) I do love reading your fic, it's just that these little canon blips do bother me a little.

The things that bother me, is mostly how you set up the premise that Harry will choose Draco Malfoy at this time. (The premise is possible to do, yes, but the way is a little...)

When Harry wants sexual experience with someone who sees him for him- well, first, canonically, there is no indication that Draco Malfoy ever saw Harry Potter for himself, as "Just Harry". And while, at least post-8th book, Harry Potter sees Draco Malfoy for himself, it is doubtful that Harry Potter would think Draco Malfoy ever saw Harry for himself (as "Just Harry" rather than "The Boy Who Lived", or "Golden Boy" or "The Golden Boy Gryffindor who rejected my friendship and shamed me.")
0) First meeting, is the only time that Draco met this "Just Harry". 1) As soon as Harry Potter was revealed to be who he was, Draco immediately went to try and make friends with the famous Harry Potter (possibly for status.) Draco is rejected. Draco is hurt. (Draco, it appears, has a tendency to lash out with a cutting insult once he is offended. But he usually doesn't actually start stuff unless provoked.
2) In later books, Draco keeps following Harry around and slinging insults and harassing Harry, Ron and Hermione to provoke him, in an attempt to 1) get revenge for Harry Potter rejecting him 2) because of a feud between Ron's family and his 3) in revenge for previous emnity between them. 4)jealousy of the boy who lived. I honestly think that Draco Malfoy very much did think of Harry Potter as Boy Who Lived, and Golden Boy, (and Draco possibly may have looked up to Harry as a hero when young- since Harry is a celebrity, or if Lucius painted Harry badly, at least then been extremely offended at the first person to reject his friendship.) The difference between Draco and the rest, is that he also thinks of Harry as Dumbledore's Golden boy as well, and other mocking names.

A person to reasonably trust- would definitely not be Draco Malfoy, for Harry Potter. Because every single time JK Rowling set up a chance between them- for one person to simply trust the other for just a little bit and /not/ use whatever it is to backstab the other (intentionally or not), they always wind up hurting each other. If Harry went to Draco, Draco would probably be the first to wave it around the school, unless he was gay himself and Harry had blackmail on him. Also, Harry, throughout all the books except for the last one (in which he may not trust Draco not to backstab him in the small, non-life threatening ways, but he'd understand if Draco did, and he understands Draco is not evil), Harry is incredibly suspicious of Draco. He wouldn't trust Draco with anything at all, as Draco has been shown constantly in the past, that if he gets some sort of information on Harry, he will use it. He will never, ever, not use it. Draco is the one to spread all the rumors. If it's someone Harry trusts, it's more likely to be a dormmate. (And then we wouldn't have this lovely, amazing story.) And...always think fondly of...? At first, I'm not sure how that can be Draco Malfoy for Harry Potter, in this state of mind, unless he's drunk or something.

So, well. These things are hard to change, they'd perhaps screw up your plot to change, and you may not want to. I don't think that Harry would trust Draco to have any sort of discretion normally- as proven in the books, he is the sort more likely to yell that Harry made advances on him (as he's still much hurt and jealous of Harry), and Harry is suspicious and well aware of that. (While it's true that Draco would never reveal that he has a relationship with Harry Potter, he's likely to reject Harry and shout it to the world as revenge on Harry.) But, if Harry had something on Draco, then, it would make sense for Harry to do so. If Draco was known for this sort of thing, and had to swear a secrecy vow or spell that kept him quiet, then perhaps.

Reasonably trust- perhaps better to say reasonably trust in the respect that Harry knows what Draco will act or try to do.

Okay, so that's all the stuff that niggles at me. Besides that, if I just ignore that, this is a glorious, wonderful fic, a joy to read, humours and fun and well written and just lovely in every way. So, it's kind of like eating a really really really delicious cheesecake with lots of delicious whipped cream but there is just this one tiny bit of the cheesecake that is weirdly sour, but it's really small.

There are some utterly glorious lines in this fic, though. I love the ending, it's so sweet, I love the note of cliche, parts genuinely make me smile, I- I guess I just love everything about how it's written except for Harry's logic in the fourth paragraph down. Draco is not a person who acts with discretion, especially with respect to Harry Potter, (and Harry is the last to trust him, as seen with 6th year) but he may be if he is known to take (or has taken a) magical vows of discretion with this sort of thing, or Harry has something on him. (if Harry has something on him, he can reasonably trust him as well. Or in general, Harry can reasonably trust Draco Malfoy to behave a certain way. ) Harry's reasoning does not sound like Harry's reasoning, but if he reasoned and came the conclusion of Draco for different reasons, then it would work perfectly.

Um, with that said. If you do change anything (which, if you don't, your fic will still be awesome), please don't change anything except for the fourth paragraph "So it was a rainy thursday...choice" (or change the minimum amount) because the story is just so amzing and each line is just such a gem, that it would be a shame.

Cute!

Awh. Just wonderfull!

I feel awesome. I read this on a Thursday XD

Very cute! _

SO CUTE! i loved this! hey... what do you know? it's thursday! lololol!

"I'm not afraid of you Potter." He snaps. "It'll be a cold day in hell when I am."

I squint out the window. "I'll be buggered! Satan is giving free sleigh rides!" Score 1 for Team Potter!

That part just made me laugh for at least 15 minutes. I'll be sure to remember that comeback for later xD

You made me even more of a hopeless romantic, especially since I'm in the same boat Harry is...or was lol Draco was incredibly sweet and I liked Harry's PoV haha Great job.

I'm not one for one shots, because people can never cover everything in one.. but I must say, WELL DONE! By far one of my favorite stories...

Adorable! I love how tender Draco is, especially at the end. I love that he cares he was Harry's first.. most people wouldn't. This was really well written, and it flowed really nicely. Good story!

So EFFING! adorable and hot and sexy and dirty! I could die. Right now. Wonderful I love it.

You own me a new ass, i laughed mine of. And you are kinda mean, from going from humour, to depressing to romance in 10 lines :p

Aw! So cute and fluffy.