yoooooo. nice plot and stuff. pls keep it up. ur really good. hope u can continue this until harry is in year 6. lol. hopefully. pls have nore malfoy bashing, or more umbridge bashing. other than that, keep itup. tha
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Good story think I discovered it earlier but updates were slow so skipped it, I regret skipping it. Frankly i would rather have a high quality short chapter than a long bad chapter.
Thanks for continuing even if it has been a while.

Love it! Can’t wait for next update

Holy shit that ending...
I’m stunned and impressed

Please Update

Yes, yes you do take too long to update. :)

Please update!

Damn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so farDamn this is a masterpiece and definitely needs to be read. And incredible job Author-san and keep up the amazing job you've done so far

I really love your story m8. It's engaging, great character building. Enough action to keep you in suspense. And your keeping within the boundaries of the universes you are melding. Keep up the great work and keep it up! Looking forward to the next chapter

Update? I really love this book. Plus, I like the unique pairing.

Good story! Looking forward to the next chapter..

Update Plz

Hey. Just wanted to say I've been binge reading this for 3 days now lol. If you still want a beta reader HMU. I really like where your story is going and the ideas you have. I also have a question.. If Percy is invincible do you think he can he shave or get a haircut?

just read this all in the last 24 hours... absolutely loved it

I like this story, I really do, but this is the point where I cant3brung myself to continue.

Writing a Percy who just lost everyone in a realistic way without making him too angsty isn't easy, but you manage to do it just fine. Him not trying too forcefully to hide his true heritage from everyone, but instead sharing it with the few people who are essential for his quest is a nice change of pace compared to most other stories. The relationship between Chiron and Percy is beautiful done, and the same can be said about Percy and Ginny. There is a good balance between demigods and wizards, making neither side too powerful compared to the other.

All in all, there are many things I truly appreciate about this fic!

The main problem I have with it is that there are 1-2 scenes/sentences in every chapter that force me to put my phone down and just take a deep breath. None of them are too bad on their own, but accumulated they become really annoying.

The things in this chapter, which are also the reason I ultimately decided to stop reading this at this point, are these:
Daphne becoming interested in Percy because he's the first dude who isn't drooling about her. Gosh, that's so cliché, it made me cringe. You know, I tried to read a few Harry/Fleur stories some time ago, and a lot of people go the "Harry is the first person EVER that was able to resist her allure, so now she has a crush on him" - route, and it really pains me every time. In my entire life have I never seen a situation where this was the case, not even close. I know fanfiction doesn't need to be realistic all the time, but that's just plain ridiculous. I kinda looked forward to how you were gonna develop their relationship, so needless to say, I'm disappointed.
The other thing that bothers me even more is that Chiron tells Harry & Co everything. Like, dude! That's so disrespectful and a serious breach of trust it literally disgust me. Let me tell you, as a person who had his trust betrayed in a similar situation, that this really hurts. Like, REALLY hurts. They have asked Percy several times about his last, and he made clear that he doesn't wants to talk about it (yet). It's understandable that they want to help him when he's obviously troubled by something, so I don't balms them for approaching Chiron, but I can sure as hell blame Chiron for just telling them EVERYTHING dammit!

Also, this feels a lot like something that happened because you want to bring the plot along and this was just the first idea you got. It's not organic at all and feels really forceful. That happened a few times before, but until now it was only small things that were easy enough to ignore. This, though, is impossible to ignore imo

This is a great story already, and it has a lot of potential to become even better, but I can't deal with they plot points. Good luck in the future!