Amusing stuff, and mostly well written. Editing mistakes here and there, but nothing that's distracting. Those saying it's better/as good as/ Butcher are just silly, but you do write Dresden well. The only somewhat annoying thing is the pacing. I know the Dresden files go fast, a single book can be a matter of days, but man, toooo much going on here. He picks up the seat/blessing of Anubis? the Advocate? Now Buyan? And Clarent? At least explain what one is before dumping more stuff on him. It would be the same as if in the Dresden Files, he gained the title of The Warden, the Blackstaff, the Winter Knight, and some other random title all in once book. Spread it out, explain a bit more about what it all entails. A fun read that would be truly enjoyable if paced better, with some more information regarding the numerous power ups/mantles. By my count, he's like, super saiyan 4 right now, but has no idea what he's doing, and that gets less satisfactory the longer it goes on. Worth reading nonetheless, and well written for a fanfic.

Wonder if Jim's next 2 books can compete with this.

Please, please continue your stories!

Befitting a third to last chapter of a Butcher novel.
Marvellous.

And 5hat is how a God of madness, chaos, death and dresdenism acts if you let him have a valid target and some time

Ah, good old elite humor. Never looses its touch.
Although Shepard usually ignored that methinks. S but then again, Shepards everywhere did get a Massive boost later anyway, so

Another chapter that manages to perfectly hit Dresdens character... Wellll done.

Deeper than butchers works. So far at least, he likes his hints.
Great. Works.

Pure perfection, this chapter.
Funny meaningful, introspective and well written.

Again and again, the only fitting reaction to that 8s:

Ahahahahhahahhaaaaaa...

Ah, one of the things where ivysage shows.
A more experienced archive could have determined it needed proof first and done it beforehand, ND all of this wouldn't have happened...

Truly, you should send these to Butcher.
An animated series of your books would be fantastic.

I wonder how OG Harry would react if
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These days were sent to him as a totally real seeming dream.

Hehe...

He is obviously the only ki d of evil. God worth knowing.
Connery if he was a gumshienwizard agent of his majesty.

Even on a re read, knowing how long this will go, this is a situation where you are in shock and terror of. Harrys future.

A start almost as good on the zero to over 9000 shitometer as Changes.
Yoi
Rock.