Reviews for Naruto the Avatar |
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Guest chapter 14 . 5/30 Naruto should be earth because the Avatar Cycle is Air Water Earth Fire. |
Kingkong101 chapter 2 . 11/21/2019 Boring |
itza chapter 14 . 11/2/2019 is so cool |
Mason Oury chapter 1 . 8/14/2019 Will Naruto and Hinata end up together! |
reaver216 chapter 14 . 8/13/2019 That was a funny ending |
CCSakuraforever chapter 14 . 8/12/2019 Esta muy bueno el capitulo mas que hace rato que no subes nada mas que esta pasando en la aldea mas que sucedio en el examen mas la aparicion de mimi |
Gamelover41592 chapter 14 . 8/12/2019 nice touch with all those angels and devils |
MysticRising chapter 7 . 5/13/2019 Uh, they're still like 12. Fanfiction or not it's weird for kids to want to have sex. I'm not judging, but stating that biologically they wont be having needs or desires for a while. Weird how this is going, but it's a good kind of weird. I for one can't wait till more shit happens (did we see sasuke's change with the clan slaughter? I did not see any mention of that and it's effect on him). Grammar could use work, and you should check the chapters cause there are whole paragraphs repeated. I'm not a big fan of the style. 1/2 of the chapters are dedicated to the story, the other 1/2 weird info. It's not bad to add your thoughts towards the end/beginning, but it does get annoying when it is most of the damn substance. Hope you continue |
Monster King chapter 13 . 2/25/2019 Great job please continue the story |
animerule64 chapter 13 . 11/12/2018 Add more chapters please |
Rain of the Forest chapter 13 . 10/16/2018 This is awesome! So are the four of them going to be the only benders in the whole story or are there going to be more later down the line? |
manapohaku2 chapter 8 . 8/28/2018 I am completely weirded out naruto and Hinata are 12. Did you age them up? If so please clarify. |
manapohaku2 chapter 6 . 8/28/2018 Why is Naruto a Firebender he should be an earthbender |
HyperA1985 chapter 8 . 5/23/2018 I am looking forward to chapter 14 and I hope Naruto learns Metal bending. |
reaver216 chapter 13 . 3/16/2018 wait so Gaara is crushing on Lee? also you spelled Suna wrong just letting you know this is an awesome story but I think you could make it into an epic story with some more details in my personal opinion but I also think Hinata should be the water bender as she has a water affinity in the show and Shikamaru should be air |