Reviews for Elessarion: Day One
Guest chapter 1 . 7/18/2012
OH MY GOD you're wonderful..your stories are the best..they seem sooo real
can you please write more stuff about legolas and aragorn..and elessarion..
Alana84 chapter 1 . 1/16/2010
Cute one-shot, I quite liked it! Well written and well portrayed as the all of your other stories, of course!

Nice ending btw, poor Legolas!
susuke2466 chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
Cute story. What's the story behind Randy Thrandy?
wetheril chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
LOL! I enjoyed this immensely. Oh, the trials of parenthood. :) Will you ever write a story about how the name "Randy Thrandy" came about? :p I love how you flesh out the minor characters so well. Alliances of the Heart was a pleasure to read.
inumoon3 chapter 1 . 6/21/2004
That's was too cute! Update your other story faster well anyway update soon!
LAXgirl chapter 1 . 11/19/2003
Hey there!

Well, what can i say? That was so utterly cute i can barely stand it. Elssarion is just so cute i want to take him home and keep him! I've actually read your other story "Alliances of the Heart" some time ago, but for whatever reason never reviewed. My humblest apologies. After reading this though, i couldn't resist the temptation to you leave you a review.

I love your writing. It flows so nicely and i love how all the characters interact. I especially like how Aragorn and Legolas act with each other: you know, one minute unable to even look at each other they're so angry and then the next... well, you know.

Anyway, I actually also started reading your sequal to AotH. I was just wondering when that's going to be updated. I'm so on the edge of my seat i can't contain my impatience for you to write more. I mean, Legolas is just distraught with thinking his life reall means nothing more to his husband than to bear children and act as the perfect "wife". I get this feeling that Legolas' new hairstyle is probably some kind of elven female style.

My only question is did Legolas purposely try to get pregnant? Because if he did, that's kind of falling right into the stereotype of what he's trying to break. Is he trying to somehow get revenge on Aragorn by showing him what acting like Man's view of what a woman is really like? Possibly somehow show Aragorn that that kind of partner is not what he really wants in a mate? Did that make any sense to you? Agh, i don't know!

Anyway, cute mini fic here and hurry with "Alliance under Siege"

Signing out

-LAXgirl

P.S. Are you ever going to explain Thranduil's little nickname...? _~ Cuz i think that would just be the funniest thing in the world! Especially seeing Thranduil's mortification at having his little secret revealed. Ha ha! It makes me laugh just thinking about it!

P.P.S. Sorry this review is so long... I'm trying to make up for never reviewing before. _
LittleSpacedemon chapter 1 . 3/15/2003
I love it! It's SO beautiful written! Aragorn & Legolas are really too cute! But, is this really already the end? Please, continue ... I would love to read more!
Vuaryn chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
Read this elsewhere but just dropping you a review to show you my support.
slasher lover chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
Aw. That was cute and funny. When are you going to write a sequel to Alliences of the Heart? I loved that story and this is a nice little story to add on.
Anita H chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
*lol*

This was great! I loved it :) A good little 'sequel' to Alliances of the heart *bg*

Those poor elves with all their superior abilities.
teftef chapter 1 . 3/12/2003
I love " Alliances of the Heart"!

And this story is so cute!

I would like to read moremoremore Elessarion &

Aragorn&Legolas's story please-.
She-Cat chapter 1 . 3/11/2003
Hahahaha! Poor Aragorn and poor Legolas! Will there be more-Please? I loved Alliances Of The Heart!
Nina chapter 1 . 3/11/2003
I read ALLiances of the hearts and I loved it. And this little story of their son was very sweet.
Star Future chapter 1 . 3/11/2003
YIPPIE! I loved your first story, Alliances of the Heart, and I was really hoping that you would continue with this. This was wonderfully funny, the thought of either Aragorn or Legolas changing a newborns diaper is too precious! Please continue with this series (if you plan on making this a series) I positively adore what you have done so far! Please please please keep writting. I LOVE IT! :-)
Red Autumn chapter 1 . 3/11/2003
Hie Soar,

Nice to hear from you again. I think you received my other email. Anyway, want to be the first to send you my review.

Again, you are just damn good! : )

Red
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