Reviews for Coach's Daughter
1HSMWiLdCat chapter 30 . 1/11/2019
I loved this story so much!
Awesome job!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/3/2018
YA! BRAT'S A PIECE OF SHIT! I THINK THE WHOLE TEAM NEEDS TO "BOOF" HIM AND LET HIM KNOW JUST HOW IT FEELS TO BE ON THE LOOSING END OF THE " DEVIL'S TRIANGLE " # MAKE BRAT THE BITCH THIS TIME, OR MAYBE LET HIS DAUGHTERS GO TO THE SAME HIGH SCHOOL HE WENT TO! # I LIKE BEER!
codybulldogger chapter 30 . 9/30/2018
I would like to see troy coach
Gabriella Elaine chapter 30 . 9/26/2018
Excellent.
LA AngelxZV chapter 30 . 9/24/2018
Omg can’t wait for the next story! Troy is honestly the sweetest!:)
Guest chapter 30 . 9/13/2018
Omg I'm so sad it ended but so excited for the next story! Overall my favorite parts are when ever they're flirting with each other or just staring at each other and not being shy on how they feel about the other. The cuteness is always great. I loved their connection from the 2nd chapter when he went to her apartment to listen to music. I loved that their best friends were dating too so were you h through the same things together.

I would live to see in the next story Troy propose early on and they get engaged. And maybe most or a majority of the story is them planning the wedding along with Gabi in medical school as well as their normal life. Troy having a good job possibly coaching with her dad. A lot of double dates with Grey and Lauren! Some drama and some fights but nothing bad like in The Show or Moment of Weakness (lol). Overall I hope they're still very much in love and still being flirtatious and romantic with one another and not being shy to express their feelings to one another or about one another. (I also liked in the last chapter how Gabi didn't want to hide the reason her and Troy were leaving his friends at the bonfire, lol. That was very bold if Her! It made Troy look great in front if his friends and it seemed that Gabi was happy that she could do that for him.)
ScandalOlitz4Ever chapter 30 . 9/12/2018
I would just like to say, I LOVE your writing and have been following you since your early stories! You are absolutely AMAZING!

I loved this story! It's in my top 5, and let me say it was hard to choose my top favorites because they are ALL so good!

Troy and Gabi took alot of risks in this story! They overcame so many obstacles and challenges. In the next story, I know med school is going to be hard. I would like to see them maybe get an apartment together and maybe see Troy propose. Maybe get an apartment with Grey and Lauren. Maybe some flashbacks from the time this story ended to where the new story picked up.

I am so excited for your new stories! Cannot wait to read them! Until next time :))
Guest chapter 30 . 9/11/2018
Oh I just loved this story. My favourite part, definitely, when T goes to rescue her from Dallas, the way she is not scared of his touch and he's her protector. When he just cannot stand it, and tells her dad was great too. And when he chooses her without thinking it for a second.
What I would like in the next story? For T to be drafted maybe? Close to Duke (I don't really know that teams are there, in Charlotte I believe?) but for them to be able to work it out and for him to be able to keep playing. The best players are sometimes those who don't see the game as some obsession, because they can see the game from some other perspective. I really want both of them to go big. Maybe you choose him not to, because the relationship would be harder, but I just cannot help but think that he's too good of a player.
Liz chapter 30 . 9/10/2018
Omg Omg Omg Loved this so much! I don’t really leave reviews but I love all of your stories so much! I actually reeead them when I get bored because I love them that much. Keep writing!
Guest chapter 30 . 9/10/2018
I ABSOLUTELY LOVED THIS! All of it from day 1 of the story. Your story line is amazing, and your way of writing is impeccable!

Defo cant wait for Closer and His Girl. Wish its coming out tomorrow! Haha

And i really hope that you're well after your surgery
Much love xxx
RossomeR5auslly chapter 30 . 9/10/2018
Absoultly loved this story.

I don't know if i have one favoirte part.

i really loved the respect Troy has for Gabi,

i love tanny and gabie's relationship.

I love when gabi and troy play bball on their court.

i'd like to see a bit more of Grey and Gabi's relationship in the next story.

i think it'd be cool to read a bit more of troy pov, - maybe if there's a fight between gabi and troy Grey's pov for one chapter

it'd be interesting to see if copper showed up - maybe gabi and troy would have a fight about him
or
if the guy that caused the accident showed up and troy and grey and lauren and the others had to help her through him being in her class or something.

i don't want Gabi and troy to fight to much in the story, but i do want there to be some fights, maybe about how much time they are spending together, or something like that. or miscommunication.

i don't want their passion for each other to change to my, i love how attartced they are to each other - i still want the hard to keep thier hands off each other.

I love your stories so much, i re-read and re-read them.
i'm currently re-reading moments of weakness
oh and btw i cry in everyone one of your stories
Guest chapter 30 . 9/9/2018
great story loved the end I liked the whole story great job. can't wait for the next one
kkmallow3 chapter 30 . 9/9/2018
OOO I LOVE THIS! I can’t wait to see Tory supporting Gabby while she is playing basketball! They deserve all the happiness in the world!
luvervanessa chapter 30 . 9/9/2018
I loved the ending. It was so well written! Just the thought of going to the cafe where they first started talking and doing a 'pickup game' right after ughhhhh! No words, I just loved it ️
GUest chapter 30 . 9/9/2018
YYAYAYAYAYYA! I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH IT'S SO CUTE! I'm hoping to see Troy and Grey in the NBA while Gabi in med school - and see how that plays out! That would be so exciting! I can't wait for His Girl to start! Good luck in surgery hope you have a safe and smooth recovery:) You are an amazing talented writer3
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