great ff noramlly i dont like ff where mc stilll is freinds with ron(and oftentimes hermione) and where there is a relative huge amount of adult content but this ff is really great.

Honestly, this was the type of story I was looking for when I first went on and found squat, so to me this is absolute gold and can't wait to see what happens between Harry and narcissisa

I guess we will never see the ending for this story but it feels like ch 15 could be the final fight and then an epilogue showing how many kids HP fathered to round it up. Thx for writing what you did though, I liked it a lot.

is this some kind of wish fulfilmenton your part where you or rather that SI fs with every female there is? it was ok till You started rubbing and fing with Narcissa! this is a disgustingpiece of sh.

Great going buddy. Though as an advice you might consider paragraphs more often...

GOOOOOOOD, Is death of supernatural, right? yeeeees, i love it 3

This was a great story and I wish that you would continue it. It seems like a pretty unique idea.

Okay. Sentence dialogue should be confined to quotes and "i" should be capitalized on its own. A few typos too, but great work otherwise.

Great beginning and story idea in general. I look forward to reading the rest of the story.

nooo... I wanna read more :)
Excellent story, loved it!
hope to read more,
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I think the author doesn't read reviews if he did he would see there is a lot A LOT wrong with this story. I think he is too busy hating America and now Trump.

Fuckkkk you can't just stop here I need moreeeeeeeee also like he's gonna have babies all over I'm sure Susan is preggo , I'm hyped for Cissy I have always loved her character sad that Bella died I would of liked for a prison break lol and Daphne can be preg also it would be funny to see all 3 with kids haha he's reaction be like yoooo death switch me out I ain't raising no kids

Wow, this is shit. You completely just made the story take a 180, not to mention how forced everything felt.

The drinking is already out of hand to the point it is honestly making it harder to like the main character. Just because he was raised in the ghetto doesn't mean you have to make him a drunkard at 16.

This obsession with alcohol is really started to become annoying, and quite honestly pathetic. Its like the only thing he does besides training atm, to the point that I would not be surprised if you told me you had drinking problems in real life.