Reviews for The Ink Is Dry
InfernalGenocide chapter 7 . 7/17
good chapter, keep up the good work
Guest chapter 7 . 7/12
Man.. this was 50k words, but with barely any content. You're on chapter 7 and have written quite a bit, but it just feels like you're circling the same things over and over again. You really need to work on brevity and making sure each chapter moves the story forward in a meaningful way. The story right now is just 60% word bloat.
Guest chapter 4 . 7/12
You say you adore Domeric Bolton, but then you force in such a terrible, rushed scene with him. That was something you should have spent a little more time on for sure.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12
yeah im a rude idiot who commented too early.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/12
Did the magical book explaining exactly what's going on really just abbreviate "The prince that was promised" to... what... save time? How the fuck would he even know what that means? OH IM THE PTWP THANKS BOOK.
Vansmoke chapter 2 . 7/12
why not stick to most story name; aegon. kinda forced jaehaery and weird tbh.
The Sithspawn chapter 7 . 7/8
Good chapter :)
Update again soon please! :)
xhope14x chapter 7 . 7/7
I like this and I can't wait to See more tho I wish the chapters where a little longer tho
jelpy1 chapter 7 . 7/7
This is a hoot. I love this "GOT as role playing game"

it may be one of the most original takes I've seen.

I very much look forward to the next chapter.
tonywarrior chapter 7 . 7/7
Jojo excelente capítulo, me está gusta do mucho fic, otra forma de verlo ,una idea muy buena, y en cuanto a a ser un warg va hacer un beneficio tremendo, te imaginas, en una batalla contra una caballería y Jon pueda entrar en ellos para desabilitarlos uffff o poder controlar a los dragones, un warg con sangre de dragón es posible, excelente capítulo esperando con ansías el siguiente, nos vemos.
RenegadeForLife chapter 1 . 7/6
I don't want to be nitpicky but that product of love bonus was kind of a lazy way to give him that information. The fact that his parentage was displayed at all is weirdly convenient but it's somewhat justified by the fact that his ancestry was relevant to his perks/religion. Randomly including the fact that his parents loved each other just feels like the system is spoonfeeding him bizarrely specific information.
snusnu chapter 7 . 7/4
Jon/val ftw!
TheDragon2000 chapter 7 . 7/6
An interesting story for sure. I always liked the gamer GoT/SoIF stories and this is no different. I look forward to seeing more of the story. Thanks for sharing and update soon!
TheDragon2000 chapter 4 . 7/6
I loved Ramsey's death! It was so terribly anticlimatic that it was completely perfect for the little shit.
Siblings Grimm chapter 7 . 7/5
Good to see a new chapter! I know writing is tough, but you just have to keep with it. Looking forward to another chapter in the future.
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