Troy rising. For the win.

It’s very easy to explain away the weasleys.- floo pounder cost a lot plus mr Weasley loves his car.
Only a parent can understand what mrs Weasley was doing- you don’t act surprised that 11 is 2 because you don’t already know it, it’s to keep the child happy- same with the question about the platform.
And finally, your si came early and saw the free rooms-
Ron had come late plus he was at the same carriage and within sight of Harry’s window- much easier to understand that the 1-3 compartments he crossed were full.

I blame the movie producers for this- they had a hard on for a 11 year old child and took away all of Ron’s and Harry’s lines and have it to her.
Ron became jealous once in 4th year. The last book can’t be counted as jkr had them WEAR a horcrux instead of storing it in the moleskin purse! All three were being manipulated by the horcrux. Ron became more jealous, Harry more emo and Hermione more bossy.
And wanting to play for your favourite team even if they are not popular shows his loyalty.

And nowhere in the books does it show that Ron was a bad wizard.

Well, overall I enjoyed the read, the story did go bad once it became a harem plus adding the slaves, you should have strictly stuck to one female, cause it was obvious that you did not know how to balance writing each relationship, to the point that Hermione Seems more like an afterthought or barely there and Luna has disappeared completely. The story was a good read to spend time and I loved some of the ideas you incorporated, again I think it became too much or that you just did not write it well. I especially am neutral on the world jumping thing, I also wish Mark had had some kids with Hermione or Haley, you really could have ended it once he had basically owned Australia then fast forward to like a hundred years where it shows he became the ruler of the world and had a whole bunch of kids and a loyal army, then have a scene where him Hermione and Haley are going on there next adventure, it would have been a good open-ended ending and you could have then decided if you wanted to continue writing or not.

Surprised Mark didn't give Harry any occlumency books, would-be kind of a waste to keep anything a secret if people can just read it from your mind.

Lol, The trolls would call what you did to Luna NTR. Though seriously you shouldn't have written her being so intimate with the mc(kissing and groping) you were pretty much-leading readers on to thinking Mark was gonna add her to his harem, eventually (even if you kept saying otherwise). Should have just written her as a friend and should not have included all that extra stuff (kissing and groping).

Britain uses £s not $s

great story. hope u loop back around to it at some point. love that grave yard sence lol dont think I've seen any si's blow up the whole grave yard before. lol

Finally, someone speaks the gospel that is Dumbles and is on the same page.
ヽ(ｏ皿′ｏ)ﾉ that man is evil. Evil I tell ya!
(へ*)ノ I was scared of him as a child growing up when I saw HP , and even when everyone else was going gaga and thinking I was weird, I stuck with it. Because no one and I mean none that powerful, didn't notice child abuse. He also kept sending Harry back even after he was told just cause of "blood wards" that are no better than fiddelus if you ask me and became totally useless after Tom's rebirth. And he was manipulative as fto send a CHILD! To his death while giving sweet smiles and saying it's for the greater good. Phew~ glad I got that off my chest.3

if you can use lightning to charge a gem then you have solves the bridge between magic and tech. all you need to do is create a fusion reactor, which shouldnt be hard when aided by magic

your english is really bad, im guessing you've had no formal education in it as most is written as it spoken how can berry winkle be so old? flamel was like 670 and he had the philosopher stone. no way ppl grow up to 700 and only have a population of 100k.
i also thought jkr said there were about 30k or double that in britian alone

This story was great, but you've written Hermione out, turned Haley into a monster, and this whole random women raping your main character... I'm glad you stopped writing this story, and you should consider deleting the last few chargers. I feel like I've wasted a bunch of time reading this.

That’s a lot of options

awwh poor fleur isnt having much luck in your story lol, same she is usually one of my favorite characters ;(

Wait I thought Harry Potter was years older than him, so Hermione would be even older?