the hero doesn't always win

The whole premise kinda sucks the Jedi order would never take a 15 year old kid regardless of how much potential they have. Also potential didn’t come off as being powerful in the force trained individuals like yoda came off as powerful untrained kids no matter how much potential they had didn’t come off as powerful.

and i dropped this fic like really -.- it is never a good idea to tell people you come from another universe or so and that they are just fiction and even in chapter 2 i wanted to drop it but i pushed through it because he did not tell them much else it was good till you decided to include another person from earth after that it snowballed out of control like really going to earth and then telling everyone you meet that you are a jedi and you were in the star wars universe like where the fuck did you pull that shit out welp i am out !

Ahhh of course a bad feeling! I think that is called author fiat!

Hey,

While I do like a self-insert as much as the next guy, I'd like to know why you went with the Disney Wars Continuity (no, it's not Star Wars anymore! Star Wars had a heroic Luke (not a cowardly loser who wanted to die!), a Heroic Han Solo who had a lot of character growth (from unattached smuggler, to Hero of the Rebellion) and a Leia Organa who was the voice of reason and a great diplomat, not a gung-ho General)?

Seriously, I'd like to know that - especially since the EU simply has a) much more story/lore and b) also makes more sense (the New Republic making the same mistake as the old Republic, namely disarming while the Empire was still out there? Yeah, that makes no sense what so ever!)

This was a good fanfiction.

This was by far one of the most amazing fics I've read in a very long time.

Holy fuck I think this is the best fic I've read in ages!

Beautiful fanfiction enough said.

I could stop reading now and be happy because that was just incredibly well written.

that first chapter, my god it's good.

love it

This was such a great story! I'm glad that Anakin didn't turn to the Dark Side and he helped to protect the Temple and all who dwell in it. I can't wait to read your drabbles! Thank you for writing this fic! Have a great rest of your week and weekend!

This chapter is awesome! You may not be happy with it and as a writer myself I fully understand where you're coming from, but I thought it was a great way for Anakin to figure things out on his own. And yay, Bane is dead! I'm so glad that Kevin will be able to get back to the Jedi's galaxy! The fight scenes were awesome! Great job on this fic!

This is a great story, sad to see it end, but glad I am it has a good ending,